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Pull The Moon

Let the glowing stare through, for Windows burn alive in sheen; Sheets warm falling sleep with her Feel of gravity.

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/1/2023 12:10:00 PM

So descriptive, I like 'glowing stare' and 'windows burn alive' - you paint a rich picture with few words, well done~

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/31/2023 6:32:00 AM

So well written, Paige, lovely depiction of the moon.

Silent One

Date: 10/31/2023 4:41:00 AM

Lovely short poem Paige...

Ink Empress

Date: 10/30/2023 10:45:00 PM

Another beautiful and moving dodoitsu. Always love a moon poem and yours just flow so well and you started it with a brilliant line so captivating! Truly drew me in even the title! Always a pleasure reading your work

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/30/2023 8:22:00 PM

exquisite and inspiring me purity if sentiments, enjoyed yann take care yann