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Pull Me Apart

Pull me apart and dunk me in milky waters celebrate my riches side by side I'm the soft to your beginning in an everlasting dream twist away my darkness let the light inside emerge in the midst of your self-fulfilling day I'm the frost upon your window sill a luscious looking cream I will be your fantasy come put your lips on me

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2017 9:31:00 PM

Very interesting images and I enjoyed reading what Darren and Daniel said. But more, I enjoyed reading this poem!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/21/2017 9:01:00 AM

Darren is right, you're eating Oreos:) Cool poem, Tim:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/21/2017 2:57:00 AM

Fantasy may turn a simple experience into a miraculous one dear, Tim. You have just achieved this miracle. A seven.

Darren White

Date: 1/21/2017 12:14:00 AM

Don't tell me you're eating Oreo's? ...... Oh, what a wonderful romantic poem, I LOVE it!!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/20/2017 9:57:00 PM

Nothing is more romantic than this with a glass of milk to share!

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/20/2017 7:11:00 PM

wow great one Tim sounds like you were dunking custard creams....Seren

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/20/2017 4:20:00 PM

Hi Tim, I just read Chris's poem. I enjoyed this "yummy" write as well. I'm with Charma, is there a contest I don't know about? :-) Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 4:28:00 PM

No, but feel free to start one. I was enjoying a snack and this poem snuck out.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2017 4:15:00 PM

Loved the line about the frosting - For some reason this made me think of ... a moment on her lips (with luck) you'll be a life time on her hips lol. I agree with Chris there is something in the air tonight!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 4:27:00 PM

lol...yes there is something in the air

Chris Green

Date: 1/20/2017 4:01:00 PM

I see what you mean....yep, there must be something in the air my friend. :) Nicely penned Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 4:04:00 PM

Thanks : )

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/20/2017 3:47:00 PM

Is there a contest going on about edible playful food?It seems Im reading a lot of these appetizing offers today..:).'In the midst of your self-fulfilling day I am the frost upon your windowsill'..How I loved this line..Awesome.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 3:50:00 PM

No but you should start one...I think everyone is ready to cheat on their new year diets. : )