Prophet

A thousand bees never settling down, buzzed within his head. Their confused drone, into a ruffled rumble grew, lengthening into frenzied drumbeats, taking the might of roaring waves or gaining the momentum of a plane, prior to take off. Mind lacking coordination limbs receiving discordant commands, He suddenly hurtled into the streets, stepping out from regimented norms and breaking loose the tether of reason, never walking, never running but scuttling from side to side like a piece of driftwood over the current. Hearing the cawing of a crow suddenly, he into a prophet grew. stood with arms outstretched, waiting for the crumb of bread to be dropped in the manner Elijah was fed by the raven in his lonesome cave. Seeing the audience swelling bigger he was enthused, greatly cheered. The riff- raff and the scraps swarmed around to see the show. Mounting the steps to the pulpit, in unfaltering voice and with fire in his words, to the congregation, surveying him with fun and sneer, he thundered……… “The Doom’s Day is near” With finality in his tone, he said- “Repent and flee from the wrath to come. The tree that doesn’t bring forth, good fruits shall be hewn down, and cast into eternal fire.” The transition was quite easy. He scurried from Elijah to John the Baptist and from John the Baptist to Elijah oscillating between sense and non-sense. __________________________ March. 28.2023 ~ Placed Second~ Writing Challenge, ‘P’ Words Sponsor – Constance La France
In my school days, I used to see him very often in junctions and bus stops. He was unshaven and ragged in appearance, but in his eyes, there was a kind of fire and he paced about restless east to west and west to east as if he had an urgent mission to accomplish. His words still ring in my ears. My heart goes out to those whom we call lunatics!
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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:27 AM
Valsa, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
George Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Thank you so much dear Constance for the opportunity given.
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 10:01 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 10:03 PM
The so-called lunatics are made owing to the outlooks of the world. True prophesy is considered lunacy by the ways of the world. It a beautiful writing with a strong character illustrated in detail. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/amazing write. Love It. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Peck Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 2:22 PM
A powerful poem about those we've forgotten or overlooked. I've seen several like him, now that many emotionally disturbed live on the street. People laugh. We should cry at the lack of kindness. Thank you for writing this, dear Valsa.
Volumes Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations Valsa. I do apologise, I read your poem for the first time today. It is amazing. such a wonderful story .So beautifully told.
Proxenos Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 10:12 AM
My great grandmother once said to my gran who recited this to my mom when she was of adult age '' I MOVE FROM PLACE TO PLACE WITH A CANDLE IN A HOLDER AND LOOK PEOPLE IN THE EYES WITH MY FLAME YET A HUMAN BEING I HAVE NOT YET FOUND" TRANSLATED FROM GREEK - MY ENGLISH GRANDMOTHER USED TO SAY THERE ARE MORE OUT THAN IN AND THEY ARE THE ONES WHO SPEAK THE TRUTH. Profound write my friend. Hugs love Jennifer.
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March 28, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Great to see you back hope your trip went great, love your poem. Great encouragement to love and support all, God can use anyone to serve His purpose: ). How many would reject,laugh and mock Jesus in these times,
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 6:12 AM
I see him alive through your stunning description. You gave that prophet a stage for his performance and I hear him. Best to you, Valsa.
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 3:07 AM
- Beautiful writing, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Daniel Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 1:55 AM
Oh yeah! Seen them around, they seem to make more sense than us, Valsa:)
Mcintosh Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 12:08 AM
Blessed. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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