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Promised Love

Promised love My love it sits this slumbered eve, o’er nighttime’s calming wind, until the dawn returns the day and brings your smile again Neath moon beam shine of feathered glow, midst stars to run and play I wait to greet a whispered morn, its shimmering display When comes the time of sunrise dreams now cast amongst its glow These words my voice shall echo true in hopes to you they flow That here within this heart of mine affection takes its fill of promised love I hold for you and I forever will Good night Soupers

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Alexis Y.

Date: 5/20/2017 8:14:00 AM

Hi Chris, You have penned such a beautiful poem. I enjoyed everything about this write. You expressed a "promised love" very well. It had good content, rhymes and imagery. I agree with Ilene you are a master at these kind of writes. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 5/22/2017 8:56:00 AM

Thank you my friend so very much for your nice comment on my poem. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much Alexis.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2017 3:41:00 PM

A promised love is such a true love when that promise is kept...A beautiful poemChris.

Chris Green
Date: 5/19/2017 3:57:00 PM

Thank you so very much Charmaine. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/19/2017 6:23:00 AM

This is so nice Chris. It flows smoothly and very comforting :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/19/2017 8:15:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/19/2017 4:50:00 AM

Morning Chris. Such beautiful thoughts to be shared between two special people. The stars Chris will always run and play. Your entry is timeless and wonderfully expressed with the Chris Green signature poetic touch. We readers thank you for such elegance. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful morning.

Chris Green
Date: 5/19/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much Lisa for leaving such kind and generous thoughts for me this morning. I always look forward to your visits and never take them for granted.