Prisoner of My Love

. My gift to him was simple A stuffed gorilla dressed plain Black white chain gang uniform Holds red bleeding heart

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Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/2/2011 11:07:00 AM

cool,I like....

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/4/2011 2:00:00 PM

Very good write my dear Sara, and thank for friending me on FaceBook.... enjoyed your work which I will catch upon this weekend if the snow and ice are a false alarm...love Michael

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/3/2011 10:27:00 AM

explained explicitly the suggestion of the title, great work again.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/3/2011 6:35:00 AM

i titled this poem while reading it and looked at what the title was. it was a epiphany

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/2/2011 5:07:00 AM

Wonderful lines of your Dodoitsu Sara for the new contest... could really see the visual quite clear .. good luck a certain chart topper for sure my friend.. hope all is well and u are not dealing with as much nasty weather as we are luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/1/2011 8:11:00 PM

sorry Sara , i see you have a different one entered

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/1/2011 8:10:00 PM

if this was for my contest it has not been entered,

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/1/2011 5:23:00 PM

Cute poem, Sara and perfect for Valentine! Enjoyed the read! Coming back to my Haiku " Mating Call of the Capercailzie", this huge bird is also called cock of the wood or wood grouse. I have posted a picture on my facebook album. Thank you also for your kind comment. You are right about a Haiku. Modern Haiku are different. Best of luck in the contest and have a great week!....Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2011 3:21:00 PM

Sara, I think I actually saw this gorilla and considered buying it for a "neanderthal" I was dating a few years back. Very cute poem!! Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/1/2011 2:39:00 PM

That sounds like a great Valentine gift for the old ball and chain. Funny dodoitsu, Sara. If it's for the contest, good luck! Best to you, Diane