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In winter we birds are sweet like jewels, still young, we do not know the winter rules; "go away cold," says one gem, on legs like a flower stem ... and then, we spin in a windy whirlpool ! One bright day the snow is melting away, and all us pretty birds dance a ballet; but, still the girl is coming, bringing seeds she comes humming ... on her hands, head- we sit happy and gay ! Come my beauty, come to me, you sweet thing, chirps a boy bird- with a love song to sing; soon, little birds fly in pairs, there are musical affairs ... each helping, mine bringing me a lost string ! Soon, oh soon the branches will have green leaves, and we will be making nests in house eaves; mothers will sit on their eggs, then, chicks will chirp on twig legs ... next spring, those chicks will do the nest weaves !! ________________________ November 25, 2022 Poetry/Limerick/Pretty Winter Birds - Nursery Rhyme Copyright Protected, ID 11-1504-539-25 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Children's Limericks sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 12/03/2022 First Place

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Date: 12/4/2022 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance . I love listing to the birds when I sit or walk outside, so peace of feeling it brings. Many Blessings my friend
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2022 6:48:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the inspiration, contest and my placement, the comment and congratulations, appreciate and blessings
Date: 12/4/2022 4:44:00 AM
Lovely, Constance. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Date: 12/4/2022 6:49:00 PM
Charlie, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 12/4/2022 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Eve's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2022 6:49:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the visit and congratulations, blessings
Date: 11/28/2022 9:49:00 AM
I love it, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2022 5:47:00 AM
Mike, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, blessings
Date: 11/25/2022 3:49:00 PM
Beautiful Nursery Rhyme, Dear Constance. Love how your characters are birds!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2022 9:55:00 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate!

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