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Pretty Blossom Buds

PRETTY BLOSSOM BUDS Plague of bees and bugs buzz then plug on pretty blossom buds Supple buds' petals suffered black and bruise from bottle break Bended bulbs bleed beads as their beauty bubbles in blink A brave boy with bucks blurt bread and butter for the buds Briefly, without bluff, brisk brute block the bad bees and bugs Bygones bent the rosy pink blossom buds beam blissfully beautiful Blue butterflies and pretty blossom buds share a merry boogie bond Now,bold and burn below sunshine bright, the bashful bees and bugs Promise never ever again to box and bug those pretty blossom buds (c) Olive Eloisa 2:26pm July 07, 2014 CONTEST NAME: Alliteration SPONSOR: Dr. Ram Mehta 4th place, to God be the greatest glory.:)

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James Fraser

Date: 12/19/2014 1:36:00 PM

Brilliant poetry Olive, absolutely brilliant. I think this poem will rear it's head as the years progress, James :) xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/21/2014 12:19:00 AM

thanks James.. :) appreciate it

Jay Holliday

Date: 7/16/2014 2:51:00 PM

Great alliteration in this poem, Olive. I read the first line, stopped, read it again, stopped, and read it again. That's how amazing it was. -Good job on this one!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 9:39:00 AM

Thank you so much JAy.. :) I appreciate your visit.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/13/2014 2:53:00 AM

Great write Olive! Congrats on wonderful win dear//Upma//

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma..:)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/12/2014 11:01:00 PM

Olive, you are the expert of alliteration with this beautiful write. Congrats for the win, my friend. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:42:00 AM

I read yours too my friend..:) it's good..:)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/12/2014 8:13:00 PM

Congrats on a sweet win, Olive! Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:41:00 AM

Thanks much Arlene..:)

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/12/2014 7:13:00 PM

Congrats on a great write Olive ....Seren

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:42:00 AM

Thank you Seren..:)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/12/2014 3:19:00 PM

Congratulations Olive. A worthy win indeed. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:41:00 AM

Thank you Joyce...:)!

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/12/2014 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations, Olive...you are on the list again.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:02:00 PM

Thanks Faye..:)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/12/2014 8:51:00 AM

Lots of B's , but its an A for sure. congrats. BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:02:00 PM

ThAnk you BG..:) and yours great too I have read it..:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2014 8:12:00 AM

I like how you placed the Bs down the centre of the poem, very clever. Congratulations Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:01:00 PM

Thank you Chard..:) yours great too I read it..:D

Jan Allison

Date: 7/12/2014 6:11:00 AM

brilliant alliteration a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:00:00 PM

Thank you Jan.. Yours too..:) hugs..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2014 5:14:00 AM

Nicely penned poem, Olive and congrats on the win in my contest

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:59:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram for the placement..:) I have fun making this and thank to Tim for his bleed word which he donated while I'm making this..:D

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/9/2014 10:57:00 PM

Fine alliterative work here, Tolkien was a master of alliteration. I have not really tired it - maybe I will in the future. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 4:17:00 AM

Try it friend it's nice ..:D my tongue twist..:)