Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Alliteration

Pretty Blossom Buds

PRETTY BLOSSOM BUDS

Plague of bees and bugs buzz then plug on pretty blossom buds
Supple buds' petals suffered black and bruise from bottle break
Bended bulbs bleed beads as their beauty bubbles in blink
A brave boy with bucks blurt bread and butter for the buds

Briefly, without bluff, brisk brute block the bad bees and bugs
Bygones bent the rosy pink blossom buds beam blissfully beautiful
Blue butterflies and pretty blossom buds share a merry boogie bond 
Now,bold and burn below sunshine bright, the bashful bees and bugs
Promise never ever again to box and bug those pretty blossom buds


(c) Olive Eloisa
2:26pm
July 07, 2014

CONTEST NAME: Alliteration
SPONSOR: Dr. Ram Mehta
4th place, to God be the greatest glory.:)

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James Fraser December 19, 2014 at 1:36 PM Brilliant poetry Olive, absolutely brilliant. I think this poem will rear it's head as the years progress, James :) xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 21, 2014 at 12:19 AM thanks James.. :) appreciate it

Jay Holliday July 16, 2014 at 2:51 PM Great alliteration in this poem, Olive. I read the first line, stopped, read it again, stopped, and read it again. That's how amazing it was. -Good job on this one! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 19, 2014 at 9:39 AM Thank you so much JAy.. :) I appreciate your visit.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 13, 2014 at 2:53 AM Great write Olive! Congrats on wonderful win dear//Upma// Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:51 AM Thank you Dr. Upma..:)

Mohan Chutani July 12, 2014 at 11:01 PM Olive, you are the expert of alliteration with this beautiful write. Congrats for the win, my friend. Mohan Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:42 AM I read yours too my friend..:) it's good..:)

Arlene Smith July 12, 2014 at 8:13 PM Congrats on a sweet win, Olive! Hugs.. Arlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:41 AM Thanks much Arlene..:)

Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 7:13 PM Congrats on a great write Olive ....Seren Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:42 AM Thank you Seren..:)

Joyce Johnson July 12, 2014 at 3:19 PM Congratulations Olive. A worthy win indeed. Love, Joyce Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:41 AM Thank you Joyce...:)!

Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 10:27 AM Congratulations, Olive...you are on the list again. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 3:02 PM Thanks Faye..:)

Barbara Gorelick July 12, 2014 at 8:51 AM Lots of B's , but its an A for sure. congrats. BG Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 3:02 PM ThAnk you BG..:) and yours great too I have read it..:)

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:12 AM I like how you placed the Bs down the centre of the poem, very clever. Congratulations Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 3:01 PM Thank you Chard..:) yours great too I read it..:D

Jan Allison July 12, 2014 at 6:11 AM brilliant alliteration a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 3:00 PM Thank you Jan.. Yours too..:) hugs..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2014 at 5:14 AM Nicely penned poem, Olive and congrats on the win in my contest Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 2:59 PM Thank you Dr. Ram for the placement..:) I have fun making this and thank to Tim for his bleed word which he donated while I'm making this..:D

Matthew Anish July 9, 2014 at 10:57 PM Fine alliterative work here, Tolkien was a master of alliteration. I have not really tired it - maybe I will in the future. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 4:17 AM Try it friend it's nice ..:D my tongue twist..:)

Ravi Sathasivam July 8, 2014 at 3:19 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 4:17 AM Thank you Ravi..:)

Cherl Dunn July 7, 2014 at 8:17 PM A nice summer piece great visual, and I love the play on words, wonderful imagery also lady. Over all excellent job. cheri Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 4:16 AM Thank you Cherl:) you comment generously..:)

Ralph Sergi July 7, 2014 at 6:18 PM Hi Olive: A beautiful alliteration well planned with a great tempo. My cpmpliments! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 4:13 AM Thanks youRalph for your drop by..:)

Paul Callus July 7, 2014 at 3:57 PM You leave us no doubt...this is alliteration! I read it slowly and enjoyed; now you try ... reading it fast:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 8, 2014 at 6:50 PM Thanks very much Paul..:) Paul Callus July 12, 2014 at 5:23 AM Weee! and another win for Olive_eloi!:) Congratulations!!! pizza and coffee today! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 4:12 AM Yes!!!! Read it fast Paul and let me see...:D

Tim Smith July 7, 2014 at 6:49 AM Well done Olive...hopefully the bees and bugs behave :) hugs :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 4:11 AM Yes they behave ..:) well I actually thought this one when you said you have garden not flower buds but of veggies so .:) thanks :)