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Pretenders To the Throne

With shouts of glee, twin hellions fled across the park while I would tread behind them. Always it was me who had responsibility of them, who acted so ill-bred. They wouldn’t heed one word I said, and I would watch them as they sped on skateboards, weaving recklessly with shouts of glee. But then at night, with stories read, they’d sleep like “princes” in their bed. And Mom and Dad would both agree they were so sweet. . . All I could see were imps who’d wake to cause me dread with shouts of glee! April 19, 2022 For Regina McIntosh's Your Favorite Theme Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/13/2022 9:47:00 AM
Very charming Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 5/13/2022 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...................
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Date: 5/13/2022 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, a fun rondeau.
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Date: 5/12/2022 8:13:00 PM
Great contrasts, Andrea! They create angst but parents see angels! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2022 6:59:00 PM
"with shouts of glee" - Irony. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2022 2:28:00 PM
Sounds like they got into a lot of trouble! Very cute (though exhausting to mind them, I'm sure!) congratulations on your win, Andrea
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Date: 5/12/2022 12:11:00 PM
Such a gorgeous write. So adorable. Love it. Congrats. God bless you too. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/24/2022 11:06:00 AM
Interesting wit, my poetess friend Andrea. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Date: 4/23/2022 7:15:00 PM
Simply brilliant.
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Date: 4/20/2022 11:52:00 AM
Be thankful you were not my eldest sister! I was notorious for sneaking up to where she slept and roaring like a puma! Aloha!
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Date: 4/20/2022 10:46:00 AM
OK, I will us-mail you my concession speech.....All hail the contest winner!!!!
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Date: 4/20/2022 8:09:00 AM
Andrea, Oh, that sentimental treasure in heel-biters glee. Love the title and tone in 'Pretenders to the Throne' in Rondeau. -Richard
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Date: 4/20/2022 1:48:00 AM
Ah the games children play. And how peaceful they look when they are asleep. A lovely observation which I enjoyed and curse myself I only had one child. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/19/2022 10:18:00 PM
While asleep at night, children look so innocent and we can but forget all their impish activities during day. I have experienced myself that amid shouts of glee, all disciplinary attempts will be drowned ! A beautiful entry, Andrea ....
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Date: 4/19/2022 9:47:00 PM
Even demons look like angels when they're asleep. I never babysat, but my daughter was a nanny for a few years and had some horror stories to tell! Great write.
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Date: 4/19/2022 9:19:00 PM
Super write Andrea. Reminds me of living at home with my sister. Good stuff. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB
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Date: 4/19/2022 6:56:00 PM
They were Angels by night, Wonderful write Andrea, hugs
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