Pretenders To the Throne

With shouts of glee, twin hellions fled
across the park while I would tread
behind them. Always it was me
who had responsibility
of them, who acted so ill-bred.


They wouldn’t heed one word I said,
and I would watch them as they sped
on skateboards, weaving recklessly
                                   with shouts of glee.

But then at night, with stories read,
they’d sleep like “princes” in their bed.
And Mom and Dad would both agree
they were so sweet. . . All I could see
were imps who’d wake to cause me dread
                                    with shouts of glee!

April 19, 2022
For Regina McIntosh's Your Favorite Theme Poetry Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 9:47 AM
Very charming Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...................
Miller Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, a fun rondeau.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Great contrasts, Andrea! They create angst but parents see angels! Congratulations!
Alex Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 6:59 PM
"with shouts of glee" - Irony. Congratulations!
Faulkner Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Sounds like they got into a lot of trouble! Very cute (though exhausting to mind them, I'm sure!) congratulations on your win, Andrea
Mcintosh Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Such a gorgeous write. So adorable. Love it. Congrats. God bless you too. Love, Gina
Baker Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Interesting wit, my poetess friend Andrea. Good luck in the contest! Bill
Lewis Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Simply brilliant.
Leffanta Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Be thankful you were not my eldest sister! I was notorious for sneaking up to where she slept and roaring like a puma! Aloha!
Lawless Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 10:46 AM
OK, I will us-mail you my concession speech.....All hail the contest winner!!!!
Theraven Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Andrea, Oh, that sentimental treasure in heel-biters glee. Love the title and tone in 'Pretenders to the Throne' in Rondeau. -Richard
Buhagiar Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 1:48 AM
Ah the games children play. And how peaceful they look when they are asleep. A lovely observation which I enjoyed and curse myself I only had one child. Best for a win.
George Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 10:18 PM
While asleep at night, children look so innocent and we can but forget all their impish activities during day. I have experienced myself that amid shouts of glee, all disciplinary attempts will be drowned ! A beautiful entry, Andrea ....
Watt Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 9:47 PM
Even demons look like angels when they're asleep. I never babysat, but my daughter was a nanny for a few years and had some horror stories to tell! Great write.
Ball Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 9:19 PM
Super write Andrea. Reminds me of living at home with my sister. Good stuff. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB
May Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 6:56 PM
They were Angels by night, Wonderful write Andrea, hugs
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