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Dark is the soul of a man who was crazy to let a pure love pass on by, his fear of commitment, his immature ways brought regret, and a tear to his eye. She was the perfect one, destined to flavor his days with a grace rarely seen, they were as soul mates with nothing but sunshine to savour, and dreams to convene. A lifetime of fantasies, nothing was real for this man disinclined to know love, he postured and played, he pretended, he posed, he was scared of this gift from above. The lesson he thought he had learned from experience vanished, it went up in smoke, he courted her, loved it when he made her laugh, yet this man was the butt of the joke. Now he's lonely again and he thinks he'll be fine, but he's stuck with the same old despair, will he ever be worthy of this woman's love, will he find the prescription to care? He still remembers her beautiful voice and the way she made light of his woes, he hopes she'll forgive him, tell him he's a fool, another chance? God only knows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/16/2009 10:04:00 AM
Last stanza first line is especially nice. It always amazes me when I hear a voice and I can remember who owns it. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:58:00 AM
You have such a brilliant way with words, dear friend and I have missed them. Such touching sentiment and beatiful flow in this poem. I hope you are well Keith. Love, Robin
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Date: 8/30/2009 11:13:00 AM
Ah, this is wonderfully composed (though that is no surprise coming from you! :) I think you've assuredly the precsciption, though you might have stalled whiile handing it over to the chemist. Haven't been coming in here so much during the summer...and aside from a few brain hiccups, I haven't been writing. But this shouldn't deter me from reading the work of others! Great piece, Keith...wishing you and yours the best! Love, Mikki
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Date: 8/28/2009 1:29:00 AM
Awesome write, dear Keith. If she reads this poem, she would have to give one more chance, Love, Lainie
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:14:00 PM
sure can be hard for some people to find what true love is good poem!
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Date: 8/26/2009 1:09:00 PM
JUst one more chance! Very nice . Barbara
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Date: 8/26/2009 11:59:00 AM
~~~BRAVO~~~ I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Keith. I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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