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Prelude

The burden of another day beset with broken dreams, of feeling inconsolable, a lonely wretch it seems, with nothing but a wounded heart to keep me company, I wandered aimlessly along, my fears consuming me, till there before me shone a vision, could my heart believe it's true? a woman come as if from nowhere, God had gifted me with you to wipe away my tears of sadness, give me strength to overcome the emptiness that long had festered in my soul so cold and numb; filling me with hope and laughter, images of brighter days, a future now so full of promise so far from my woeful ways. I know now grief was just a prelude to a love both tried and true, Joy is now my only measure with a girl as sweet as you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/13/2008 9:55:00 AM
What a perfect poem for your sweetie-pie. :) Perfect. thanks for all of your comments, i love them. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/12/2008 11:03:00 PM
This is wonderful, Keith. The rhythm and rhyme are perfect. I love the way the emotions flow from the darker to the light. The last stanza is my favorite. How wonderful to find love. She really must be special. I'm trying to write more stuff. I have a couple of older things to post but one is depressing and I'm deciding it I should post it yet. It's called Insanity and I use the "F" word in it several times. I don't want to change it because it is significant but I may use symbols. Love Robin
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Date: 12/12/2008 5:45:00 PM
Deep emotion and lovely to read. What a sweet expression of love to someone who makes you so happy. ~ Sincerely, Carrie
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Date: 12/12/2008 2:43:00 PM
words can't express the admiration i have for this piece. not only is it beautiful, rhymes, and posseses the quality that real poetry is suppose to represent. very very good. John H. Loving III
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