Predator

Frantically, I walk on a lane of vile secrets, past glared dazes from hooded eyes marking me as obsession’s target where a quest to nail me taunts my fear : with endless shrieks echoing , “ I will follow you, “ … a voice raspy as brittle tones imposes its eerie presence. And I quiver in coiled form, Helpless, while the breath of uncertainty wipes the restful assurance of most nights: In a click of time, life smells danger knowing not if those taloned hands would clutch me in the darkness or light. All at once, I watch myself drenched In the cloud of foreboding , torturing my lucid hours now haunted by one incensed predator. Until I confront this ghastly shadow laden with karmic sins, wolves of yesterday assaulting my every breath's intake…that I come face to face with this damned nemesis in guileful pursuit and the nemesis which haunts my spirit …is me. Written for Silent One: STALKER 11/13/2017
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Wigley Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 1:09 AM
This is a cracking write, nette, love it. Congrats! Viv x
Hamilton Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Great twist at the end, congrats on another win!
Barden Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Congrats, Nette.
Williams Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 12:04 AM
What a stunning poem that kept me fascinated from beginning to end. Congratulations on a well deserved win Nette...Maria
One Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Wow Nette, the language you used in this poem is evidence of your great vocabulary and poetic talents... Deep and sad write.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest
Enriquez Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Dear Nette: Nicely done my friend. As always, you write with great oomph! All the best then, Leon.
Michaels Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Nicely done with a great twist ending. That's one stalker that, unfortunately, we can never elude or evade... just postpone the inevitable. Regards, John.
Marty Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Incredible flow with a pivotal ending ! When we deal with our own shadow, light opens up. I will bookmark this one!
Sivey Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 4:15 AM
Wow, I LOVED the take you have for the STALKER contest! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning! Your words have resonated within me and kept me rasped in awe! I hope to break free of the grasps of the pains at which you describe so perfectly within your clever piece! What an amazing write my friend! Great Work!!
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 7:53 PM
First I want to thank you for that amazing poem you email me there was no way I could compare. My husband loved it. Wow!! Excellent write. Your imagery is amazing, Nette, and the older we get it gets worse. Hugs dear friend
Pandit Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Quite a turn at the ending--a well written story of introspection--best for a win, nette!
Wanter Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 11:07 AM
So powerful! To come face to face with ourselves thus destroying that nemesis!
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Excellent nette...as we age the mirror is more telling
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