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Mother, Winifred Christine Stainbrook-Etgen

Most of my precious childhood memories center around my mother. She’s the reason why I’m alive, why I smile, and why I cry. The memory of her, her strength, her compassion, and her integrity flow through my veins. She nurtured my love for words, and it’s her nurturing that echoes in the words I write.
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I open the sewing basket, letting my eyes and hands run over the tools she once used—the scissors, the darning egg, the pins and pincushion, and spools of thread. I gaze at the metal spool-shaped bobbins remembering how, as a small child, I flushed them down the toilet creating quite a ruckus. I finger the thimbles recalling her numb fingers and hands. Despite her diminishing eyesight, she quilted until her last day, painstakingly feeling the fabric, cutting the shapes, and hand stitching the pieces together silently suffering from the pricks and misery her needle sometimes inflicted. When tiny drops of blood dripped from her fingers, nary a tear emerged from her eyes. I close the basket and walk through her sewing room, silence enveloping it. The faceless dress form patiently waits for her return, an unfinished garment draped over its shoulders. The sewing machine sits idle, its motor no longer whirring and the needle no longer punching through the fabric with its steady, rhythmic chuka, chuka, chuka sound.
echoes pierce silence. the sound of mother’s spirit I know in my heart.

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Date: 2/1/2024 6:48:00 AM
So soul stirring. Love this. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:03:00 PM
thank you, Gina, for your kind words...grateful for the placement in your contest...I recognize that takes extra effort, and I much appreciate your doing so, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/29/2024 5:55:00 AM
Sara, this is a great haibun. Lovely memories to be written about. Beautiful mum. Your face has a lot from her. Let me congratulate you for your winning in the contest too. Awesome piece taken out from your heart for us to enjoy. Thank you for sharing. Have a great week my friendxxx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:04:00 PM
thank you, kind Maria! Thanks for your congratulatory words and for saying my face favors my mom's. What a splendid compliment. I appreciate your visit and your meaningful words, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/28/2024 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, well deserved, i loved this poem before too. So touching, sending you light always
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/28/2024 4:20:00 PM
thank you for your congratulatory words and for re-reading this poem. Hearty congrats on your placement in the contest...well deserved...enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/24/2024 5:33:00 PM
An emotion-filled haibun about the memories of your mother. Such a lovely haiku to accompany your prose.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/24/2024 5:34:00 PM
thank you for visiting, Jerry, and for your positive comments. I appreciate you, Sara
Date: 1/24/2024 11:22:00 AM
Dear Sara, my eyes are misty while reading these precious moments that you've so carefully placed to the poetry page. It sounds like your mother was a wonderful woman, so kind and compassionate. Dedicated, with a tender spirit. She will always be in your heart. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, my sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/24/2024 5:33:00 PM
thank you, sweet Brandy, for your visit and for your touching comments. You're right, my mother was the quintessential mother; yes, she still dwells in my heart. Glad you found my poem moving, beautiful, and emotional. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/24/2024 7:53:00 AM
- The dear memories ... worth more than gold :) - (I think I've read this before, Sara ) - A wonderful poem :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/24/2024 5:36:00 PM
you're right, Anne-Lise--worth more than gold. Yes, you probably read it before...I edited it some in order to prepare for the contest. Good memory, thanks for stopping by, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/24/2024 6:08:00 AM
Such memories should be etched forever in your hear. I lost my mother a long time ago, but never forgotten.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/24/2024 5:35:00 PM
You're right, Victor, they're forever etched in my heart. thanks for your visit, Sara
Date: 1/24/2024 5:59:00 AM
Those truly are precious moments to hold dear, Sara. Melancholy moments that make us shed tears and some that bring a smile to our lips. Their echoes pierce the silence in a room, but will forever live in our hearts.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/24/2024 5:35:00 PM
thanks for your thoughtful words and comments, comments that were poetic in and of themselves. Yes, those melancholic moments seem to bring a range of emotions together...they echo through our hearts and soul. Thanks for stopping by, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/24/2024 5:09:00 AM
Hey Sara, did I read this poem before? Your words unfold a tender narrative of memories stitched into the fabric of a sewing basket. The opening scene, where your eyes and hands trace the tools she once used, immerses the reader in a tactile and emotional journey. The vivid imagery of metal spool-shaped bobbins flushed down the toilet in childhood adds a touch of innocence, contrasting with the solemnity of the later verses.. such a lovely poem..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/24/2024 5:16:00 AM
You probably did read it once before, Silent One...good observation. I edited it somewhat for the contest and resubmitted. I'm grateful for your visit and for your mindful reading of the poem with its images and emotions. Grateful for you, Sara

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