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Precious Gift of God

When I met you the first time, I didn’t know, across the splendored springs of yearning years to fast friendship the encounter would grow, that would endure amidst all smiles and tears. We walked the garden path of deep desire, felt the flower called love bloom in our heart, I burnt in you like a fly in the fire. We’d vowed then nothing would set us apart. As our twined footprints fade in trail of past, by my side you're my best friend I now see. While the twilight gleam of old sun wanes fast, I know you’re the precious gift God sent me. In my journey through the tempest of life I’m not lone, you’re with me ever, my wife.
Posted : December 10, 2019 Syllable count : 10 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com June 19, 2020 Contest : Gifts Sponsor : Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 1/2/2020 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/1/2020 2:00:00 PM
beautifully expressed as always sweet Subimal, congrats on your placement and Happy New Year! x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:32:00 PM
Wonderful write, congrats Subimal in a nice placement in my contest!
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Date: 12/29/2019 11:30:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this. I like the last lines, which I believe you wife delights in likewise: "In my journey through the tempest of life I’m not alone, you’re by my side, my wife." God bless you.
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Date: 12/22/2019 6:33:00 AM
Congrats for your winning Poem Subimal
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Date: 12/10/2019 5:22:00 PM
You do romance so well! Great write my friend!;)
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Date: 12/10/2019 3:14:00 PM
Very Romantic Subimal. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 12/10/2019 12:39:00 PM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so tender and romantic Subimal!
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