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Prayer For Faith-Miltonic Sonnet

How can it be that few of us can see the hands of greed and pride have dealt their blow and caused a horrid lack of faith to grow Will God still listen to my earnest plea as I request His help on bended knee? I’m lost, I did not see, I did not know that we had come to cause a world of woe alas, attributed to those like me My fleeting youth is spent, but hope hangs on that better generations yet to come will resurrect the truth, the faith, the light and recreate the path that seems foregone To greed, despair and pride they won’t succumb; I want to trust one day they will unite *Written May 10, 2014 - Miltonic Sonnet

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Date: 5/13/2014 11:27:00 PM
A very thoughtful and well written poem. A great win, Carolyn. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:38:00 PM
Wow Carolyn beautiful meter, man never does seem to get less greedy though. Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:16:00 PM
The light of spirituality seems to burn its brightest in times of greatest want. Those times may be upon us. Congratulations on a fine poem. Well done.
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:00:00 PM
I hope and pray, too. Great sonnet. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:59:00 PM
The despair of the world left behind is so evident and sad, but a message that should be read. I too want to trust that they will unite. Well done, Carolyn. Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:06:00 PM
Way to go >>>># 2...Sara
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Date: 5/13/2014 12:02:00 PM
That is my wish too, Carolyn. Wonderful Miltonic Sonnet. Congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:59:00 AM
Glad to see this fine poem on the list...Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:13:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, Your poem is such a powerful reminder to those who are blinded to the fact that many of society's woes have come about through greed and pride. I certainly hope all is not lost forever and spiritual enlightenment shall be universally acknowledged for the future of mankind. Congrats on your worthy win x Theresa x
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:19:00 AM
Superb with each line.. :) i wish there is an inner revival of faith one that is selfless.......CONGRATULATIONS!!! gbu, OLIVE.. :)
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:19:00 AM
Super poem, Carolyn! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:13:00 AM
Lovely poem, Carolyn! Many times it is not that faith is lacking, but people have faith in material things while forgetting the hand that deals out all the main cards! congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:34:00 AM
Wonderful write Carolyn! Faith is what keeps us all alive dear ! Great n congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/10/2014 3:59:00 PM
.. Greed and immorality seem to be the new norm....Great write Carolyn ...hope you are doing well...hugs
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Date: 5/10/2014 3:31:00 PM
- True words ... but sad to think about, dear Carolyn - Very well written ! - Wish you a lovely weekend. - ...perhaps one day ???? - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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