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Power of Words

Josie was an adorable girl, soft and quiet. She rarely spoke harsh words. Her words were like honey, sweet, and mellifluous. Even as a child, she won hearts with her nectar-like words and gentle nature. mellifluous words like sweet nectar and honey win everyone’s hearts As Josie grew up, she had to face a lot of disappointments, hurts, and bitterness. Her sweet nature was trampled by the ways of the world. She began to experience anger and sadness. Her words were clipped like sharp bullets, doing damage to all those around her. People began to wonder whether this was the same innocent, angel-like Josie. words like sharp bullets tear through hearts and leave deep scars unretractable Josie knew that she hurt other people and she cried within. She hated spreading her bitterness, but what could she do? She prayed to the Lord and asked forgiveness, prayed for strength to face the challenges of life and to remove her bitterness. She regretted ever having spoken harshly and went and asked those people to forgive her, which they readily did. She felt at peace and strove to spread love, peace, and joy around her. For she realised that words have immense power, and once spoken, can never be taken back. They leave unforgettable, lasting impressions. think before you speak words have a lasting impact we’ll be judged by them 12.11.2021
{Matthew 12:35-37 - A good man out of the good treasure of the heart bringeth forth good things: and an evil man out of the evil treasure bringeth forth evil things. But I say unto you, That every idle word that men shall speak, they shall give account thereof in the day of judgment. For by thy words thou shalt be justified, and by thy words thou shalt be condemned.} For Charles Messina's "Haibun - with a message" contest

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Date: 12/19/2021 8:05:00 PM
Wise words, Jo! Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/18/2021 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A great Haibun write. Words can and do cut like a knife. Once said, you can say I am sorry but cannot take back. Yes, "think before you speak." Have a blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/18/2021 3:03:00 AM
Jo, you are so right. The power of words is so vital in our everyday lives. Great message here...Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 12/17/2021 10:16:00 PM
The power of words so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your great win Jo...!
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Date: 12/17/2021 6:03:00 AM
The emotional power of words is on display in your haibun! Congratulations, Jo!
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Date: 12/17/2021 5:30:00 AM
A beautiful story in the form of haibun with two great haikus. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/15/2021 8:04:00 PM
A well written narrative, Jo . I use to be that person at one time, but it was speak the truth. Truth hurts. good luck in the contest. Happy Holidays my friend.
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Date: 12/13/2021 5:18:00 AM
Such an inspiring write with a great message dear Jo... Enjoyed reading... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/11/2021 1:20:00 PM
Great message Jo. well written poem. Have a good day! Bill
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Date: 12/11/2021 12:42:00 PM
I think this girl is amazing to have overcome so much, and to realize the power of words, she ought to get a badge of honor for being so strong and beautiful. :)
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Date: 12/11/2021 10:10:00 AM
Aren't words so powerful. I wrote a poem "Words" (in my book). Yes, words can uplift a person's spirit and be optimistic or can bring a person down and be pessimistic. Such a well written poem full of words of wisdom. Have a great week-end.
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Date: 12/11/2021 12:43:00 AM
Great prose and haikus. A lesson to be learned. ~~
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