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Poverty

Insufficiency holds sway, Dawn chauffeurs meagre segments, In this ambience, the children play, Anticipating their paltry fragments. Homes wear a sombre look, Nothing delightful to cook, The furniture is worn out and spent, Dilapidated and bent. Vacation is too much of a luxury, Hands are dutiful in domestic drudgery, Children wear undersized and patched attire, At nightfall, with these, they retire. Opulence is seen as an illusion, A treasure hidden in the deep, Out of reach until they go to sleep, Away from the world of seclusion. March 28, 2023. Writing Challenge - 'P' Words - Poetry Contest, Constance La France.

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:16:00 AM
Thompson, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/5/2023 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/30/2023 9:46:00 AM
- I enjoy your beautiful poem, Thompson :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 4/5/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/29/2023 8:25:00 PM
"A treasure hidden in the deep, Out of reach until they go to sleep" - The concept of poverty is very beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. It's an honour.
Date: 3/29/2023 1:33:00 PM
A beautiful poem about a sad condition. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2023 2:32:00 PM
Thank you, Ann. It's an honour.

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