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Pounding

As the knights march, further they go they pound on the ground miles around the other army balancing the flow makes tremendous, horrific sounds As swords did swing, guns were shot they sent all lands into a shock a hero schemed, while a villain did plot neither knew that both would rot The hero swung his sword Whilst evil shot his gun both settled their score for at that moment two became none The pounding stopped and all was silent Why must peace come only after violence?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/17/2011 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Ryan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your fourth place win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori
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Date: 11/14/2011 8:56:00 PM
Thank you everyone for the congratulations. I am thrilled to have won. I really want my work to be known
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Ryan
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:57:00 PM
Ridiculous isn't it? And such a loss. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:55:00 PM
Unique style, Ryan. Love the effect in each of your stanzas. A worthy poem for a win, Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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