Potd How I So Long For You


                   

                     ~I Long ForYou~




In this star-studded autumnal, late, still night.
The red, cinnamon candle burns as my soul, so bright.

The room, a forest, of most sensual you.
With rainbowed walls, that enhance our bodies, too!

How I utterly desire your soft, olive skin.
And deep eyes that so hotly draw me in.

Picture us, lost in love’s deep, aquamarine sea.
An aqueous, sensuous, fairy dream of you and me.

We can flow with moonlit,synergistic clouds
Magically, fearlessly, saying… I want you, out loud!

The loving, lace curtains flow gently, the winds on our lovers’ backs.
For there is no tomorrow, when there is nothing in the world lovers lack!

Blow your warm, rose scented blossoms on my pounding chest.
You are my forever treasure, for in loving you, life is truly the best!


                          9/16/2022
                                ~1~

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Gorelick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved POTD! Robert
Romios Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 11:57 AM
Dearest Robert! Hugs and thank you for your congratulations. Sometimes, don’t you find, your own poetry moves you? That’s how I felt when I wrote this. I wish this magic happened every time! Hugs….Pangie xx
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September 22, 2022 at 11:13 AM
Pangie, beautifully written night of romance with the wind on your backs and the lace curtains moving in rhythm with you. You write skillfully of romance in delicate "rose scented" steps. I see your meaning but it is encased in soft, but poignant, images. So well done my friend! Blessings to you. And, what did you think of our surprise September rains?! Truly a blessing in our drought. Felt like a NW fall. Congratulations on your POTD!
Romios Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Hello, Sam! I am honored by your words! I know what a fantastic writer you are! Pass some of your talent, my way, please do! I was not outdoors at all the days it rained. My daughter said, it was little compared to what was forecasted, did you see Scotland? Makes California look like s desert. We do need mucu more rain. It was so hot here, the ants, coukd nit bear the heat of the earth!so glad you dropped in to comment …………Here’s to a wet Autumn,sorely needed! Hugs, Pangie xx
Watt Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 1:24 PM
Pangie, I had to open a window after reading this for the room had suddenly gotten warm, lol! You have a gift for writing this kind of sensuality as I have seen in some of your previous love compositions. Sensuous, but not overtly graphic. Romantic, but not over the top. It's a fine line, and you navigate it well. I particularly like the thought that there is no tomorrow, for lovers tend to lose all track of time. Also love the line "We can flow with moonlit,synergistic clouds"... gorgeous! Congratulations on POTD, dear lady! John
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 3:10 PM
John, what a fun first line. I nearly rolled off the couch with laughter. Not kidding! Poetry and passion~ whooh! Some sensual cocktail. Mountains don’t turn me on, no matter how great. I love trees and flowers and animals…but a male animal with a soul, a brain and love? I can’t think of anything better on earth.you are correct,,,it is a fine line to write this way.i do not like cold poetry that’s a collection of words to fit a form! Glad you liked it, I did! Thank you being a prince and commenting, John. Hugs, Pangie xx
DiMino Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 10:27 AM
I thought this one special, why I gave it a Fav! Congratulations! Blessings!
Romios Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Dearest Prince…you sweetheart! Thank you ever so much for FAVING this. You and others who did the same give me the impetus to go on writing. Thank you for doing that. Best to you and your Princess, Hugs,Pangie xx
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 7:47 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Pangie :) - Glad I stopped by today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. Hey, I am glad you stopped by as well. Fun to get the POTD. Thanks. I am playing the third version of Candy Crush. Have you tried it? I am in the top 30 each day in their “Royal Championship.”. I do not use my name there nor sign up as a member. But it’s fun!
La France Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Panties, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~
Romios Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Good Day, Constance! What does “panties” mean? LOL! I am glad you found this and commented. You are wonderfully gracious! Pangie xx
Wolf Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 9:08 PM
A feast of sensuality, Pangie, pulsating with passion. WOW! Congrats on a riveting POTD. Bravo, Gershon
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 9:35 PM
Love your phenomenal verbiage, Gershon! Thank you for another comment, spinning off rays of brilliance. I reread it and riveting it is! Did you see Jim Slaughter’s comment? I loved it… Pangie xx
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September 18, 2022 at 6:11 PM
Congratulations, Dear Poet, on your POTD. A romantic, sensual poem - creative and passionate. BW ~ Mala
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 6:43 PM
Dear Mala, welcome! I have never met you before and hope I get to know you. I have written many pioems, thanks to the support of special friends here who never deserted me. They believed in my potential. I still have a long way to go, Mala. Passionate, indeed, I am! I am far from an intellectual. Like EE Cummings, I believe as he wrote…that..”KISSES ARE A BETTER FATE THAN WISDOM,” you can tell how heavily he influenced my life and my poetry. “Creative and Passionate”. Thank you for saying so! Love, Pangie xx Pangie xx
Nicole Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 4:21 PM
"lost in love’s deep, aquamarine sea." Such a beautiful place to be. Passion and poetry, as two become one- it's so breathtaking indeed. This is soft, sensual and so romantic. Congratulations Panagiota, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 4:44 PM
Dearest Brandy: I think the sea is a magical place. And would love to experience it’s beauty. I can, through love! Your comment is a far better summary than anything I can ever hope to say. I am delighted so many old and new poet friends came by today. I miss Connie not being here, I must say! I hope we carry on her tradition of kindness, respect and love. Bless you Brandy! Love, Pangie xx
Awtry Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 2:54 PM
Pangie your pen has been on fire! Congratulations on POTD! :) ps
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 4:34 PM
PS. Hello!i hope my pen becomes a raging, towering, inferno! ROFLMAO.. but, not likely….and thank you so! For being here today, my friend! Hugs, Pangie xxx
Anaya Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:25 PM
Nice POTD, longing! "Poseidon's Door" The sea's voice stirs his imagination With her whispering, rumbling roar Her secrets reveal through long contemplation The key to Poseidon's door 8/21/22 Copyright © Robert Gorelick ~another POTD!
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, so very kindly. Fantastic quote, Ayana! Hugs, Pangie xx
Slaughter Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Not as graphic as the Kama Sutra, perhaps, but pretty hot, Panagiota. Congrats on POTD.
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:32 PM
Dear Jim, Love your honesty! The Kama Sutra is far more graphic as you know. I so appreciate your visit… Hugs, Pangie xx
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September 18, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Hello PanaGIOTA, WOW! This is Awsome! I read this poem several times. Hugs xxx Darlene
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September 19, 2022 at 5:00 AM
Hello Panagipta, Yes I read this poem several times. xxx Hugs. Darlene
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Wow,Several times….Iam really both touched and impressed, Darlene! Thank you for coming by today.Very special! Your friend with hugs, Pangie xx
Eagle Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 8:24 AM
POTD - how exciting for you! This was so well done. Very happy for you.
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 12:39 PM
Hey Elena! When not expecting it or hoping for it…what a surprise.it’s nice to know you are happy for me. Hugs, Pangie xx
Fowler Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 6:47 AM
Soft and sensual Pangie. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Linda
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Thank you Linda.i liked your adjectives also! Hugs, Pangie xx
Baker Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations for your POTD, Panagiota! Your enticing love poem was eloquently written. Nice rhythm throughout my friend. Enjoy your special day! Bill
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 12:16 PM
Greetings, Bill! I appreciate you saying what you liked about the poem! I tried to keep the rhythm as together as I could, music and rhyme, intrigue and fascinate me! Thank you, the POTD and much needed rain are two magnificent gifts. Hugs, Pangie xx
Kitchin Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Pangie, congratulations on POTD with your sweet romantic poem!
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Greetings, Tania. So meaningful to me to have you congratulate me!!! Thank you and glad you liked this romantic poem. With great joy, Pangie xx
Delaney Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Pangie……with these beautiful phrases of a treasured love. It is saved into my Favs. Hugs, SuZ
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:49 AM
So happy, Suzanne that you came by with your congratulations! A Pitts’s with your gift of writing… Honors me exceedingly with a FAV? Wow!. Hugs, Pangie xx
Tor Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 5:21 AM
Your creative juices are flowing in this passionate romantic desire and sensuality for your love. An emotional and physical want that is written in a seductive fashion. Congratulations Pangie. Your Romantic side shines in this recognized Poetry of yours receiving POTD. Again Congratulations...
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:41 AM
Michael..excuse the cc after my name…my Edie button is not working. Sorry. I meant xx not cc. PR
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:36 AM
Good day, Michael, the poetic magician! Sensuality is magnetism that you picked up on in the poem..my eyes shine with the magnetism of love. Love creates potent,everlasting desire. Your generosity with your heart and English language is outstanding, Michael! Grateful for you and thank you. Hugs, Pangie cc
Gentile Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 5:11 AM
Pangie, congratulations on your POTD honors for this sensual treasure of romantic desire so beautifully crafted! Enjoy your day!!
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Dearest Mike~ loved your review and appreciation of this POTD! Thank you your words…” beautifully crafted!” Plus the other adjectives, as well. I never expected this No our I can tell, you writing it, was like being in Nirvana! Best to you…it finally rained here after many months. Bless you, thank you. Pangie
Kyser Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 4:59 AM
Nice, congrats! Enjoy your inbox!
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Hi Jeff! Thank you for your congratulations…no, I will not get many replies. but I have gotten used to that)) Comments do not a great poem make.i am still only here three years compared to others who write far better. I am grateful to be able to write poetry! But, hope to be better in five years. You are so gracious to stop by! Merci! Pangie xx
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 4:26 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this erotic, sensual work. Sara
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September 18, 2022 at 3:51 AM
Pangie this is one of the most romantic, passionate poems I’ve ever read, a fave for me. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle xx
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Dear Poetess, Belle! What a heartwarming comment! I used to pen more romantic poetry in my first few years. It is my kind of poetry. Or pietry on relationships. I never had a thought it would be a POTD! I never write to win anything. Getting my soul on paper, is what works best ..Like my”Sappho and Venus”, which follows no form listed here. And is no was free verse. It’s my own style. I respect classical styles but stick only to those that work for me. With admiration for your artistry here! Humbled by your FAVING this. Love, Pangie xx
Gilmour Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 3:18 AM
Such beautiful romantic words dear Panagiota, you truly deserve this POTD. For me love is what makes life worth living and at this time there is so much love for our dear Queen which is bringing our nation together in such a special way. Thank you so much for this beautiful picture your words have painted - it is a Fav for me, to read again and again. With love and hugs Ann xx
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 10:39 AM
Greetings, dearest Ann! We feel your loss, here, across the pond, deeply! Your Queen, even in death, has her love reminding you, that to love and unite, beats divisiveness and disquietude. And, am so pleased you took the time to comment. And faved it also. Gracias! Pangie I am a poet of the heart,not the head. Love is the magic elixir that binds us… With gratitude, Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 12:34 AM
You paint a very romantic scene Pangie. Congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
Romios Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Dearest Tom, I am so glad you saw it as I tried to pen it. Thank you for the comment and your help yesterday. You are a true companion on a poet’s road in life. Marci, Pamgie xx
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