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2026-05-21 Ponder Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France 

Ponder

Be a student, not a follower. Take interest in what someone says, then debate it, ponder it, and consider it from all angles.      Jim Rohn  

Darkness engulfs me as I sleep
  when suddenly bright lights light up
        and find myself in a strange room. 
I detect three massive doors.
        I ponder what it all meant.
        Perhaps it’s all a dream.

I push the first door open.
       A lovely gentle breeze blows on me.
       A voice whispers:  Do you believe in life?
Confusion, I ponder but find no real solution.
A silly question.  I am alive, so I have life!
Somehow, I feel it is not the right answer.

The second door is an enigma.
It creaks open.  
A beautiful vista appears before me: 
               Mountains, meadows, rivers.
               Birds fly. Animals prowl. 
               Gardens bloom.
I’m confused. I reflect what it can all mean.
As I ponder, the scene begins to evaporate.
Again, the door closes and I am left outside, alone.

What does the third door hide?  
       On the door is written LOVE.
       The door does not open.
A voice whispers:  Have you ever loved?
I reflect: So many gorgeous women! 
I develop a headache.  Maybe I never really loved.

         I am wide awake in my normal bedroom.
          Have I been dreaming?
            Three questions in my mind!
                No doors though.
                  I can only wait.  
                    Eventually I will find a solution.
                        But who is orchestrating all this? 

                             I still ponder!

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative/great write. The doors were a wonderful idea. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Seeker Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 10:05 PM
A superb write, Victor, much to ponder. I see this is a contest winner too. Congratulations!
Smith  Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 3:55 AM
Lots to ponder. Congratulations on your place in the competition.
La France Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:32 AM
Victor, beautifully penned, love the image and quote. Congratulations on your win in my Ponder Contest ~
Buhagiar Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:39 AM
Thank you dear poet.
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:12 AM
Back with congrats on your win, pleasure to read your work, Victor. Very well-crafted poem with breathtaking imagery.
Jones Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 7:17 PM
Engaging write! A kind of mystery that makes one ponder. Like the quote as well. Good luck in the contest!
Hind Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 6:57 PM
interesting Victor :)
May Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 5:42 AM
Each door has something to ponder about, Nicely penned
DiMino Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 2:01 PM
The Dream Weaver! We are all sleeping constantly, but a few wise like yourself realize it. The answer for me is never Who...but why? I started in heaven...only to work my way back there. Doesn't make sense. If you ever find out, don't tell me. Pondering is too much fun. Blissfully I revel in ignorance! Blessings my friend. Great creative writing.
One Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 1:23 PM
I can feel the pondering in your poem and you have created deep imagery throughout.. love the stanza about the second door... best of luck in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 12:14 PM
- Simple questions can be difficult to answer ... you think you know ... but, you still don't know ... a deep and beautiful poem, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:13 AM
What a most thought provoking poem this is, Made me ponder and wonder, if i am really alive and awake and aware and also on the subject of love! Youv highlighted and taken the prompt to a very moving level as always dear Victor! Absolute pleasure reading you. Sending you light always ~
Brul Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 6:07 PM
This makes me ponder, too. Thought provoking piece. ^____^
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 5:04 PM
engaging and intriguing words, Victor....intense and great contest entry.
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Life , nature and love. They are all essential. Very nicely done, Victor
Kitchin Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:40 PM
Victor, an intriguing poem. Nicely done, best for the contest. -hugs
Poet Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Enigmatical, beautiful, and profound. What a fascinating and contemplative poem! Several primary ideas in this magnificent poetry really hit home for me and merit the greatest praise, Victor:
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 10:43 AM
Wow! Fantastic! Three great questions! Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 10:24 AM
Plenty to ponder with an air of mystery Victor. You rose well to the challenge. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 10:24 AM
Victor, we can't fathom the love that God has for us, His agape Love. We barely can love on a human level, but as we get older, we understand a little more about love and how to love. This work of yours reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara K.
George Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 9:56 AM
You always come up with poems worth pondering. A beautiful poem that takes the reader to a mysterious world. A great entry. All the best dear Victor.
Buehler Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 2:40 PM
Mysterious, lovely and deep. An interesting, thought provoking poem! Well done!
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