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Polinated With Hope

“the honeycomb’s all empty, buzzing awoke memories- a queen- deep medallion and black, wings rest atop cherry trees” noontime breaks and my soul awakens to thoughts of when youth was pure- I catch a glimpse of a flying insect I recognize and she is free - (like a childhood memory) I set my eyes upon sights of wonder as mother nature bestows her marvel...and I reminisce I remember when trees withered like Autumn’s duty, and as I became older the seasons changed as quick as a storm passing yet at times slow as a drizzle my mind recalls youthful dreams, days when I was worried for no reason and anxious about everything and nothing at the same time- laughing in emerald fields at eventide under a sangria sunset; though I was sensitive, I was strong listening to the buzzing that awoke memories, remembering my youth, atop the cherry trees ~my nectar has been polinated with hope as the years pass~ 21 lines total Where Bumbles Bounce Poetry Contest Craig Cornish September 5, 2019

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Date: 10/3/2019 4:56:00 PM
Lu congratulations on your place in the contest with this awesome write!
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:21:00 AM
"my mind recalls youthful dreams, days when I was worried for no reason" So well said! So PERFECT!
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Date: 9/5/2019 10:06:00 AM
I know you wrote this for a contest, but still I pick up the metaphor of your memories. So lovely.
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Date: 9/5/2019 9:35:00 AM
i always know when i open your poem, it will be beautiful....you never disappoint and always deliver, gorgeous poem and great take on the theme, i think i will be seeing this one near the top of the winner's list :) hugs
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Date: 9/5/2019 9:28:00 AM
Wondrous poetry... All my best wishes for your contest entry - Many blessings
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