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This poem was written after struggling with writer's block for about twenty days...just imagining how a poet's friend, the blank page would feel...
I lie here waiting for your gaze -
The hurt in your eyes is cold fire,
Why don't you come near nowadays?
What have I done to draw your ire?
The hurt in your eyes is cold fire,
It seems you are upset with me,
What have I done to draw your ire?
Talk to me or you'll go crazy;
It seems you are upset with me,
I feel useless, please fill my blank,
Talk to me or you'll go crazy,
You know I'll help you, let's be frank;
I feel useless, please fill my blank,
Why don't you come near nowadays?
You know I'll help you, let's be frank,
I lie here waiting for your gaze.
(Pantoum and Personification)
May 25th, 2017
Contest: Form P
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Copyright © Joanna Daniel | Year Posted 2017
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