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This is poem #10 of my Poetry Portfolio for class.

You feel that painting exists Still upon the canvas But it has lost its luster When it keeps it growing Inside yourself Your heart beats faster As the painting develops Into a masterpiece Of dimensions evolved Into pieces of life Shown by the colors upon The white canvas Showing where dips an sways Revolve around the world’s Only repertoire of truth Thrust upon life’s grace Where I see the painting In my mind’s eye still Such a grueling chore Where the paint sends beauty And laying upon the canvas A picture of abstract Proportions to random Acts of nothingness Still plays its tune upon My desires to blend the colors And bleed the picture Into what art Surely means to me Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/21/2017 5:35:00 AM
Wonderful write, Russell - I am also an artist and first-and-foremost, a songwriter/musician, and there is SO much about the creative process that intersects ALL forms of the artistic endeavors, as this touches on beautifully! Wonderful rhythm and delivery - just gorgeous, My Friend!
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:07:00 PM
A very artistic verse my friend...we paint with words...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:42:00 AM
Russell, this is terrific and amazing, well done
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Date: 8/20/2017 8:04:00 AM
Great write...Beautifully done...
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:42:00 AM
A beautiful depiction...the layers are where the meaning lie.
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:51:00 AM
I can see the painting developing in your mind Russell--well depicted!
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:35:00 AM
Hi Russell. Wow!! I pain landscape and wildlife/oil, but I can fully relate to this poem. You have done so well with this creation. I can see it, feel it and very much enjoyed it. I am saving it as a favorite! Thank you for sharing this :)
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