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Poetry Numbs the Pain

One day we will be, forever silent.
Where would we be without poetry?

As a child, I buried my heart,
drained from games death would play -
in adulthood, it still refuses to resurface.

Grim Reaper hides in the corner of my eyes.

Is there such a thing as an overdose of sadness?
Because sometimes pain has no metaphor,
so we bleed the seeds of dormant blossoms.

I stare at a forgotten photograph,
at a boy I once knew from my past,
scruffy curly hair with tense, timid, tired eyes.
His life is a fuzzy blur, but I feel his misery.

Some memories are merely reflections,
some reminders, returning within season.
Unwanted souvenirs of how unfair life can be.

When skies are clouded like ashen smoke,
all I hear is untuned violin strings, screeching -
violent, like tangible bursts of thunder.

An orchestra of lightening forcing an
explosions of unerupted emotions.
Like pain placed in a paper bag,
scattered like a dead man's ashes.

I've come to terms with people 
not seeing beyond the smile.
Still I search for love in freezing rain,
to prevent from numbing sensations.

In the darkness of death,
I still remember the white lights -
and my mother's rainbow love

maybe that's what saved me.

I realise the reality of adversity.
I'm an advocate of its lessons -
because, i'm a definition of each battle,
yet I know the war is far from over.

Poetry is the perfect way to release suppressed emotions.
My heart desires to beat like a flutist's musical notes -
like a kite floating higher and higher against brutal winds.

Silent One
4 December 2020

This is an example of my current contest called catharsis poetry.
I attempted to use poetry techniques like light alliteration and assonance.
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George   Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 3:54 AM
Yes! My poetic friend...Poetry, I find is the medicine that truly heals the soul. This poem is very real for me. Your ability to touch the hearts of others with your writing...is your gift. Sincerely, Elaine
Ball Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 1:25 PM
To me this speaks of a little boy who had to grow up too fast. He is sad as a man and feels cheated of a happy childhood. A fine write my friend but a very sad one. Hope it's not you. God Bless, JB
Macfarlane Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 3:57 AM
So sad and deeply felt, it touches the soul. Releasing suppressed emotions in poetry is therapy indeed. Great write S.O. Hugs
Sheehan Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Great piece. It rings of truth. Enjoyed immensely.
Zerlaut Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 3:19 AM
Well said. It's been too long since I've read your work. Thank you for sharing. Poetry is like breathing for us poets, long enough away from it and we forgot what it was like to truly breathe.
Teagan Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 5:01 PM
yes you are right, it numbs the pain, but it is avoidance. It would be better to tell our innermost thoughts to someone we are intimately connected with, not hiding behind a poetic smokescreen to a group of strangers. Still, if it helps one feel better by being able to release supressed emotions, then it is a gift in the moment. I hope you are well.
Fenn Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Hi Silent One! You are right. Poetry is very therapeutic, so where would we be without it, especially when memories pop up like “unwanted souvenirs”? Well put!
Babcock Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Such sadness on this piece and have not seen a new posting from you this year. I hope all is well with you S1. love phyl
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Another masterpiece of a beautiful sadness, poetry is a release I do relate to the little boy, strange how some harsh memories resurface, but we kick them to the curb with a cathartic write! Loved this one it's a fave for me!
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:32 PM
This is beautifully written and so well expressed. Avery touching piece letting one glimpse your soul. In truth were it not for my close relationship with my Savior I would probably be dead or in the loony bin by now. God Bless my friend. JB
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Illuminating introspection this heart-piercing poem be, SO! An abundance of muse dancing phrases ... Is there such a thing as an overdose of sadness? Because sometimes pain has no metaphor, so we bleed the seeds of dormant blossoms. Brilliant poetry, my dear friend. Love and Happy Holidays
George   Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 4:05 PM
My poetic friend. I believe our early years mark us for life and play a major part in how we create our future. I believe any life...worth living...is a journey of roses and thorns. Poetry...for me is medicinal. You are such a gifted writer. Wishing you the best year ever in 2021. ~ Elaine
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Hello Silent One, yes one day we will all be silent. I think that will be the day when we will all be famous. Merry Christmas and Happy New Enjoy your Year. Enjoy your day my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 8:56 AM
"Another Masterpiece" I love this and your 2 pictures/notes. You are so creative. When I grow up, I want to write like you. Have a wonderful day with blessings...............
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Hello Silent One, I sense that you had a sad childhood. Okay my childhood was not good either. I have learned to put my past behind me. Question: Words of a son that keep coming in my thoughts are. Don't Stop Thinking of Tomorrow. What is the title of the song By Pink Floyd? Thank you. Good Morning. Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 9:51 AM
I ask because I can not find the song. Thank you Silent One.
Proxenos Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Dear S.O, you seem down my friend, it is said that its OK to not be OK. During this last year, it had been difficult, and we don't know what a waits us and how tomorrow will be - poetry does numb the pain, and I think we have such a wonderful greoup of friends on soup, I never though it possible, but I have more friends on soup than I have had in many years. It humbles me. I enjoy your Poetry SO so very much. Happy Christmas to you and yours my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Buck Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 8:17 AM
I occasionally glance at a photo of that boy from my youth. Scruffy hair, tense, tired eyes. We should compare pics sometime and rejoice we've made it this far. Have a Happy. Thanks again for sharing with all of us on the soup. One of your fans, oldbuck
Babcock Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Back for my second read as Christmas is always a time for emotions and memories for me. A sad poem and this year a sad year with only a few people allowed for Christmas in our households. Makes me sad for sure. Have a Merry Christmas. love phyl
Willcox Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 9:11 AM
Lovely use of alliteration. Great (but sad) read. x
Anderson Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Very good spill of emotions and memories. Never let the pen be still. Thanks for sharing.
Tor Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 6:05 PM
It is the perfect way of releasing ones emotions. Wonderful write my friend...
Thomas Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:36 PM
You really made it seem as if your heart was laid bare here. It truly can be medicinal when we can get those words out the way we want them to come out... Going back to just working on forms new to me until I can write something I feel is truly from me :)
Y. Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 10:35 AM
WoW! Silent, This is an exceptional example for your contest. You bared you your soul. Amid such sadness, there was a ray of hope in the form of poetry. I agree with your title poetry can numb the pain but it can also heal a wounded soul. Excellent job. If you weren't hosting the contest, this would be a front runner. Enjoy the rest of your day:-)Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 1:46 PM
wow, I wish I could have done mine this way: so elegant and poignant. Anyway, I am generally a happy person not prone to depression, so this kind of topic is hard for me. I didn't want to bore people again with my horrible condition brought on by Prolia (the only thing really making me sad), so I did the only other topic nagging me to death these days!!
Schiavina Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 11:02 AM
A true masterpiece as each of your beautiful poems evokes an applause.
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