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Poetry From the Heart

Poetry from the heart Chimes like a silver bell, resounding in my soul brightens up every day, my spirit is made whole. Poetry from the heart Sounds like a golden bell, Ringing pure vibrant tone Announces your wedding, Ringing tone in your phone. Poetry from the heart Tolls like an old bronze bell, Sharing our liberty To speak and write boldly Asserts our right to be. Poetry from the heart Dwells like an iron bell, Solid, touching us deep Shares common emotions Memories we will keep. [POETRY]> THIRD PLACE WINNER Written April 3, 2022 [Syllables with HMS; Rhymes with RhymeZone] For “Form M – Monchielle” poetry contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 4/17/2022 4:02:00 PM

Milt, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your wonderful poem ~ Constance

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/17/2022 6:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Constance, for sponsoring the contest. I enjoyed writing for it and thank you for my placement. I am enjoying this particular series you are sponsoring.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2022 4:34:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/16/2022 7:33:00 PM

Sara, I really appreciated your read and your comment. Thanks!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2022 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Poetry from the Heart," says it all. "Beautiful" Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/15/2022 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Paula, for your encouraging comment on my poem.

Terry Miller

Date: 4/15/2022 7:41:00 AM

I am coming back to congratulate you on this well-deserved placing.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/15/2022 7:54:00 AM

Thanks, Terry, I really appreciate it.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/14/2022 11:01:00 PM

"like a silver bell", "tone in your phone", iron bell" - Beautiful poem on poetry, with many figures of speech. Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/15/2022 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Chris. I so appreciate your reading and commenting on my poems.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/5/2022 6:23:00 PM

Never heard of this form before but it's obvious you've mastered it. Brilliant penning, Milt!:-) Congratulations in advance, my friend. I was expecting a Monoku and Constance threw a curveball, teeheehee. I'll try my best.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/5/2022 6:38:00 PM

Ah, thanks Edward. You'll do fine. I had heard of this form before, think I'd written two or three of them, so I had a bit of a head start. I hope she likes it.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/4/2022 7:41:00 PM

The bell tolls for thee ~ amazing write, Milt, this one will be difficult to beat!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/4/2022 11:23:00 PM

Ah! Even as sponsors judge, why’d words we fudge as portrayal, if it entails soul betrayal?

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 7:47:00 PM

Oh, I don't know, Unseeking. Whenever I write something I think is pretty good and submit it to a contest I always get brought down a few notches!

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/4/2022 9:19:00 AM

The best poetry is definitely "Poetry from the heart" Milt! Well done! Good luck in the contest!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 10:29:00 AM

Thank you so much for your warm and encouraging comment, Mike. I hope you have a wonderful week.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/4/2022 6:42:00 AM

Nothing better than "Poetry from the heart"

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 8:25:00 AM

I think so. That's the kind of poetry I like best.

Joseph May

Date: 4/4/2022 3:33:00 AM

Very nicely penned Milton, I especially liked the third stanza, best wishes

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 8:27:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph, for your thoughtful, kind comment on my poem.

Terry Miller

Date: 4/4/2022 2:06:00 AM

A different form; once again managed so well, Milton, good luck

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 8:28:00 AM

Thank you, Terry, I was writing for Constance's contest. It is an interesting form, a bit like a quintilla.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/3/2022 6:42:00 PM

The theme, and your first line "Poetry from the Heart" resonate with me! Beautifully written in an unusual form. Warm wishes!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/3/2022 6:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mala. I really appreciate your thoughts.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/3/2022 3:06:00 PM

Hello Melton this is a different form. Good luck in the contest. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/4/2022 5:31:00 AM

Hello Milton, Yes wait and see. Enjoy your day my friend.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/3/2022 6:09:00 PM

Yes, it is. I believe I followed Constance's particular instructions. We'll see. Thanks for your read and your comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2022 2:53:00 PM

ooh this looks complicated Milton, I've just had a peek at the contest, I've never seen the form before I think you have aced it:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/3/2022 6:12:00 PM

I don't know about that, Jan. I had written three of them in the last year or so, but I can't say it's a popular one with me. I gave it the old college try!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 4/3/2022 2:44:00 PM

Nice one, Milt - I like this form, joyful, short lines are nice, and this one has a nice ring to it. :-)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/3/2022 6:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jeff. It's not a form that is high on my list. I think I have written three or four of them previously, but it's not really a form that comes to mind when I have a theme. Oh, well.....