Poetry

I don't know that poetry
needs be anything but poetry,

while myself realizing
that definition greatly varies –

but I have seen acrobatic
words that flop like
wingless birds, 

and predictable political
soap-boxing – not my vote
if lacking a fine musical note, 
with a rose in the orator's hair
for those, like me, who otherwise
wouldn't care – 

aside from all else
poetry should be beautiful
first, even when the subject
is misery, poetry having ability
to spiritual transcend

yet purely gymnastics does have
a poetic flair

and politics has its tuneful trumpeting
elephants and rhythmic donkey braying, 
though
written mostly
for whoever is paying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 5:37 PM
Make it beautiful in its prettiness or ugliness. Make it poetry! :)
DiMino Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Brava! Well said -- perfect!
Radice Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Great work Joe! Yes, poetry means different things to different people. For me, there has to be a deep expression of the poet's feelings delivered with a certain amount of intensity that can trigger emotion in the reader...and I'm beginning to sound a little pretentious so I'll stop there :) Suffice to say your opening line sums it all up perfectly for me: "I don't know that poetry needs be anything but poetry.." Yes! I'm off to read this again. Cheers - Gary.
DiMino Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 7:35 AM
For sure; the reader immediately becomes aware if the work is a living extension of the poet, having intensity, honesty of emotion. Great comment, Gary. Thank you.
Ricci Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Good Morning Joe. Yes poetry should be of beauty and emotion even when expressing darkness. I agree. I always thought poetry expresses positiveness in some way even when stating loss or sadness. It was a pleasure turning to your page and entry. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying the true meaning of poetry. Take Care. Blessings (smile)
DiMino Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 10:17 AM
Hi Lisa; I think your collusion is a valid, profound observation. No matter the subject, if poetry does not express Verse's subtle transcending spirit of deeper, often indefinable beauty -- most ethereal when far too vague for common surface definition...yet vividly felt, there in the soul of a work...tacitly if not overtly uplifting despite the even desperate nature of the subject -- if such beautiful spiritual enigma is not present...then it is not the best poetry has to offer. Blessing my friend.
Baker Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 2:49 PM
There's wisdom in them there words, Joe. Good for us to hear. I think of poetry as the way I allow others to see,hear,and feel the toughts of my heart and soul. It's communicating through heartfelt emotions and intellect. Blessings my friend, Bill
DiMino Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Thank you, Bill; oh!--only if I felt as wise as I am:) Blessings my friend!
Pandit Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 6:22 AM
poetry should be beautiful--I agree my friend. Much truth and wisdom in your ending stanza, Joe.
DiMino Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Thank you, Vijay; blessings!
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