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Poetic Love -Creative Layout

We have never met across the oceans blue
I know that I am the one you write about
Your romantic words are sheer perfection  
I drink in every syllable
My heart  s    k          p       s            a        beat

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How can I tell you            
I’m
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In love with you


I can no longer control my emotions;
If you could look at my heart you would see it is 
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Just word from you and I will be by your side….

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU ARE HAPPILY MARRIED AND THEY ARE WRITTEN ABOUT YOUR WIFE!


I simply don’t understand …


Jan Allison
10~24~15

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Bill Lindsay Date: 10/28/2015 10:55:00 AM Wonderfully done, Jan ... proud to be on the same page as you x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2015 11:03:00 AM Aww Bill the feeling is mutual I read some stunning creative poems:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A Date: 10/27/2015 9:37:00 PM Jan, Wonderful win. SKAT Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2015 7:42:00 AM Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/26/2015 8:45:00 PM I see from the comments below that you won! Congrats - this is creative and clever. I enjoyed it LOTS ... CayCay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/27/2015 2:21:00 AM Yes I got a first - was delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie Date: 10/26/2015 7:43:00 PM Very creative Jan and the story can either make us wince or smile - congrats - Lindsay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/27/2015 2:21:00 AM Exactly Lindsay and you see it happening on here:-( hugs jan xx

Arlene Smith Date: 10/26/2015 10:01:00 AM Been there done that lol!... Congrats on your great win, sweetness!... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 12:49:00 PM Thanks Arlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/26/2015 8:25:00 AM This is sweet Jan and you have layed it out so creatively. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! I am happy to be in your talented company. Cheers, Connie Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM Thanks so much Connie i saw some lovely creative entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/26/2015 4:28:00 AM Jan, emotive with a nice twist and creative in the way you arrange the letters.. =`)~Olive Eloisa Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM Thanks Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/26/2015 1:04:00 AM Congrats on superb win Jan with this wonderful creative layout and poetry! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 2:08:00 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman Date: 10/25/2015 7:38:00 PM I knew my sinking feeling was correct, congrats on your win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 2:08:00 AM You were correct - thanks Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 10/25/2015 7:10:00 PM Excellent creative layout with a nice twist in your poem, Jan! Congratulations on your fine well-deserved win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 2:07:00 AM Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 10/25/2015 6:33:00 PM Congratulations on you wonderful win, I love the poem!!!!! hugs eve Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 6:37:00 PM Thanks so much Eve I have seen some wonderful creative poems and really enjoyed reading the winners:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/25/2015 5:51:00 PM way to GO, this one is super well deserved. BIG congrats to you. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 5:54:00 PM Thanks Andrea I had fun with this contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman Date: 10/25/2015 5:02:00 PM Ha! Jan, I love it. So serious and sweet until the last lines. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 5:03:00 PM Thanks James i had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak Date: 10/25/2015 3:15:00 PM I love the last lines about the wife, Jan. You must think "outside the box" all the time.lol Kudos on this beauty! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 3:18:00 PM I never know what my muse will come out with Dan - having never written a poem since I was at school I think I'm making up for lost time in the last 20 months lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 10/25/2015 1:21:00 PM Jan, congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 2:40:00 PM Many thanks:-) Hugs jan xx:-)

Paul Callus Date: 10/25/2015 12:17:00 PM Oh dear!! jumping to conclusions!! How often we read the signs wrong!! Very witty and creative, Jan. Congratulations on being placed first:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 12:22:00 PM Sadly sometimes we do Paul! :-) hugs Jan xx

Donna Jones Date: 10/24/2015 10:09:00 PM Aah clever!...wonderful presentation..good luck... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 7:44:00 AM Thanks Donna I enjoyed the challenge - have seen some lovely poems I think the sponsor will have fun judging this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 10/24/2015 3:22:00 PM Jan, this is such a clever and creative write! I enjoyed the twist at the end. You should place well in the contest. Good luck in contest:-) Alexis 7 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 3:30:00 PM Thanks Alexis - just a bit of creative fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman Date: 10/24/2015 2:57:00 PM Good luck in the contest, I have a S I N K I N G feeling you have a winner here. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 3:29:00 PM I don't think you can format the comments at all - it is hard enough to do it in the poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx Greg Hoffman Date: 10/24/2015 3:14:00 PM Lol I typed out sinking diagonally to TRY and be creative but it just capitalized it. Can't figure it out Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 2:59:00 PM LOL Greg - I will wait and see - a win is a bonus but as long as I get reads and comments that is the most important thing:-) Hugs jan xx

Eric Boddie Date: 10/24/2015 10:49:00 AM and that is why I don't do married women....because it will forever leave me slipping....and slipping is what I refuse to do....all because there are so many sexy single women like you....I Love this jan....;) Login to Reply Eric Boddie Date: 10/24/2015 11:20:00 AM I mean single women who think like you....single women with Beautiful hearts....;) Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 11:10:00 AM ha ha ha well I've never hidden the fact I'm married ... so the final comment definitely doesn't relate to me :-) hugs jan xx

Caryl Muzzey Date: 10/24/2015 10:38:00 AM Very creative indeed Jan, loved it. Best to you in the contest.~ Caryl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 10:49:00 AM Thanks Caryl:-) I have seen some lovely 'creations' :-) hugs jan xx

Paige Clinton Date: 10/24/2015 10:23:00 AM Wow! I really enjoyed it! I hope you get one of the top places! It was amazing! Wishing you the best of luck!-Paige P.S: I just realized we entered the same contest! That's amazing! Mine is called Dear Anna, a really old one I wrote! I hope you like it! :) :) :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 10:27:00 AM Will drop by and read it Paige:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 10/24/2015 9:13:00 AM Wonderful Jan....sounds like the theme of the day. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 9:56:00 AM Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/24/2015 8:47:00 AM hahahaha. LOVE the creativity!!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 8:48:00 AM Thought out of the box lol :-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 10/24/2015 8:40:00 AM Jan ~ I don't know whether to laugh or cry over this one. Your confession of love is so sweet, then you yelled at him for finding out he has a wife! Did he mislead you? In either case...It's a very emotional write. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/24/2015 8:53:00 AM 25 years...that's something to celebrate! Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2015 8:45:00 AM ha ha total fiction my friend I was just being ultra creative lol - I will be celebrating my silver anniversary next June ! Hugs Jan xx

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