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The breath of life, in a poem, comes with the first stroke of your pen. Your heart and soul poured into it, ink, the blood that flows within. Imagery, becomes sinuous, entwined with rhythm flowing. Singing amongst your memories, your emotions, overflowing. Taking form, molded by your hand, into an image on the page. With depth of vision, to be shared, spotlighted on the stage. To be spoken and proudly shown, or kept for your own collection. Individual, unique art, ones own personal reflection. For Linda Marie Contest: Poetry Panorama Placement: 4th ***On a side note. Read just the top line of each couplet, from top to bottom. Then read just the bottom line of each couplet, from to to bottom. There are three different poems within this verse. Funny how that worked out.

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Date: 12/9/2010 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in the "Poetry Panorama" contest hosted by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 8:06:00 PM
Very interesting how you did that, Paula. A belated congratulations to you on this well deserved win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:26:00 AM
It is an artistic accomplishment to roll up three poems into one. You amazed yourself and inspired many others with this crafty write! Congratulations on your award-winning poem!
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:44:00 PM
Paula...good play with form...many congrats on big win in the contest... Luv/Best wishes.... hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:54:00 PM
What an amazing form this is. truly deep and innovative. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/16/2010 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Paula
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Date: 11/16/2010 12:14:00 AM
my special congrats on your citation, an awesome read that pulls me in.. warmest, nette
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Date: 11/16/2010 12:08:00 AM
special cheers on your win, paula.. just brilliant! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:56:00 PM
Very clever work on this, Paula. You just bring poetry alive with your words here. Congratulations on your well deserved win to Linda-Marie's contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:47:00 PM
Yes and we know you planned it that way. very clever. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:12:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your success in my Poetry Panorama contest with this unique and interesting write and entry.. I followed your instructions and u are correct in your reading of this poem.. extraordinary .. thankxxx for supporting my contests luv..
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Date: 11/12/2010 5:39:00 PM
This is something beyond great! It is really inspirational! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 11/10/2010 2:19:00 PM
Yes, you can read it all these ways, Paula. I would suggest putting the final note on several lines because it spreads very far across the page this way. People who read it and want to comment might have a hard time finding the letter code. The poem is terrific! Art upside down, right side up, very cool! The form itself would make a great entry for Constance's contest, too. Unique! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:44:00 AM
This descriptive poem has quite a melody to it, Paula. We do pour our hearts and souls into our poetry, hoping people will be able to relate to our "personal reflections." Well done! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/9/2010 11:02:00 PM
wonderfully penned, good luck in the contest
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Date: 11/9/2010 10:08:00 PM
a radiant offering filled with graceful poetic tone and tempo.. lovely couplet, paula.. all the best in the contest! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:26:00 PM
Paula, I truly think that this is one of the best I have read today. Keep up the good writing
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