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I was going to write about the moon, maybe I still will, maybe I did... *_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*

I'll come around again Realign with the stars Until then I have little to say It feels like an endless fall Exit... Entrance I feel a need to be held I'm lay, avoiding my day It had good intentions But I'm not ready for it End... Rest It's ok, I see how today is ok Shapes and curves Distant noise Ability innate if I choose Stop... Start Just breathing through moments For they lead to others Begin again Begin again

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Date: 2/27/2024 4:20:00 AM
An intriguing poem...you have invented more phases than the original..had to work hard putting it together and even then I'm not sure if I got it right. Do like.
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/27/2024 2:30:00 PM
Glad you liked it, it went off on a tangent and didn't really turn into the poem I intended but I liked the idea :)
Date: 2/25/2024 12:42:00 AM
So begin again we shall ,ain't that right tough girl ?
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/25/2024 12:47:00 AM
It's phases of the moon, we've seen it all before but somehow still watch with interest...
Date: 2/24/2024 12:47:00 PM
An insightful poem that I enjoy for its directness.
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/24/2024 4:11:00 PM
Well thank you Hilda! I'm all the things, directness included x
Date: 2/24/2024 10:37:00 AM
What’s the chances of the moon just happening to be exactly where it is Dilly, 400 times smaller than the sun, but 400 times nearer the earth, making it appear the exact same size in the sky, at this particular point in its existence, zero I reckon, I’m convinced it’s there for an unknown reason, I do love the human analogy you have drawn here, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/25/2024 1:58:00 PM
Ah but it all depends on which version you buy into, I don’t buy into any of it, how long is your version around? 1843 CE!
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/25/2024 12:40:00 PM
Hi Dave. Islam was founded around 610 CE. Judaism (Mosaic law) 1513 BCE. That's a whopping 2100 years so not real sure where you got your facts but I'm not up for a debate, jus sayin. @ Dilly yes thank you I'm elated to have a forty year relationship (this spring) with Jehovah, the Creator of heaven and earth, including our awesome moon
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/25/2024 7:03:00 AM
Hey! I’m afraid islam got in there long before your lot did, they even claimed the crescent as their symbol, perhaps you’re saying they should adopt 8:3,4 and drop 54:1-2, all 1.8 billion of them!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/25/2024 12:25:00 AM
You seem so happy Tommy that I'll keep my opinions to myself (even on my own page).
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/24/2024 4:34:00 PM
Psalm 8:3,4. I win. No, God wins. Every time :)
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/24/2024 4:12:00 PM
Ooh dialogue in my thread. I choose my winner as...
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/24/2024 3:53:00 PM
It's not rocket science. It's right where the benevolent Creator wanted it to be, for multiple scientific reasons. It's beauty and charm? Icing on the cake
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/24/2024 12:20:00 PM
Not many conspiracy theories about the sun/moon relationship believe it or not, I’m still working on a theory myself, but am convinced the truth lies in the eclipse!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/24/2024 11:58:00 AM
What do the conspiracy theorists say? Or the mystics? There will be other sources tapping into the truth...
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/24/2024 11:05:00 AM
The best the physicists can come up with, is a cosmological coincidence! I’m never buying into that!
Date: 2/24/2024 5:15:00 AM
Dear Moon, you don't have to say a word if you will promise to just keep lighting up our nights with your glow.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/24/2024 7:19:00 AM
;-) thanks
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/24/2024 5:21:00 AM
I'll pass your message on Lin :)

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