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she is tranquillity yet lava flows in her veins cut her open and you'll burn she is Eve's apple nemesis to patriarchy one bite and you'll bleed she is a rainbow an eagle taming storms no chains can contain her she is a pilgrim of passion composing a trail of moments inscribed on many a heart she is beauty personified but apathetic eyes remain blind know her and you'll feel the calm for i see her soul illuminate through her eyes so i break open the cocoon to float like butterflies ascending higher kissing silent stars smiles beaming like the moon content in her companionship
Simple Musing The Silent One 26 January 2020

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Date: 6/6/2020 3:46:00 AM
Excellent tribute to the mystique of femininity, SO. Enjoyed this very much ~ John
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Date: 5/4/2020 2:16:00 AM
A symphony of images and contradictions ... you have a lot of killer lines here, Silent. You kept me surprised until the end, discovering each new facet of this lady's explosive personality. Very nice.
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Date: 3/15/2020 7:28:00 AM
Another favorite. You're so amazing. I SO LOVE your words. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/24/2020 12:52:00 PM
Your talent shines, Silent One.. A congratulations on your POTD!! Such a glorious write! This gem is going right into my faves.. Have a blessed day!
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Date: 2/22/2020 11:08:00 AM
You are so versatile and able to stretch your ability. Love your way. Photography, music, writing, so much! Congratulation!
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Date: 2/19/2020 9:22:00 AM
A pleasure to read and absorb this poem! reminds me that there are women and then there are Women.
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Date: 2/15/2020 6:52:00 PM
She is you S1 Beautiful
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Date: 2/14/2020 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful imagery...it's actually a deep muse. :D sunita
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Date: 2/11/2020 3:25:00 PM
Congrats on your POTS, SO. Well penned.
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Date: 2/9/2020 9:05:00 AM
Content in her companionship ? I think not. This being is so much more - she's every thought, every passion, every inspiration in your head. You long for her presence. She's your muse.
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Silent One
Date: 2/9/2020 2:28:00 PM
I would not say she is my muse... a friend who has gone onto new pastures, but was a real inspiration.. Thank you Peter..
Date: 2/3/2020 4:18:00 AM
She is a lot ...and you can see it. Kind wishes, Kai
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Silent One
Date: 2/3/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/31/2020 4:21:00 PM
Content in her companionship...sigh.. Such a lovely ending to a beautiful poem. Did I tell you lately how much I love reading "You"?.Awesome S.O
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:40:00 AM
You did not tell me, but thank you.. I appreciate your feedback..
Date: 1/30/2020 2:30:00 PM
You never fail to amaze me, thank you xo
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:42:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/30/2020 12:18:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful soul you are lucky to have in your life SO. A one of a kind. Kelli
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:43:00 AM
Yes an amazing person... Thank you..
Date: 1/30/2020 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on POTD! Again, lovely, my dear friend!
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:43:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/30/2020 1:31:00 AM
Wow... who is she? all the best...
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:44:00 AM
Can't say.. everyone will want to be her friend lol
Date: 1/29/2020 3:32:00 PM
Had to come back and read this again. love phyl
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:45:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/29/2020 6:06:00 AM
A well deserving write for the POTD. Every word and every line is so filled with vibrant energy that while reading my nerves sensed something unusually great!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:55:00 AM
Thank you.. glad you felt this poem
Date: 1/29/2020 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations Silient One, a poem of great talent - rightly chosen as POTD. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:57:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/29/2020 4:13:00 AM
Woow... congrats the silent one. Your were not so silent with this one. I like the composure of wording too.
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 5:59:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/29/2020 12:22:00 AM
Great write, SO. I like the use of spaces between phrases. I especially am fond of "she is a pilgrim of passion / composing a trail of moments". Thought provoking POTD. Well done, sir.
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 6:00:00 AM
Thank you John..
Date: 1/28/2020 10:22:00 PM
Silent, congrats on POTD with your beautifully penned poem _Constance
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 4:19:00 PM
thank you..
Date: 1/28/2020 9:24:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Silent..
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 4:19:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 1/28/2020 6:58:00 PM
Your thoughts always touch the heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the day. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 4:21:00 PM
I am glad you felt them... Thank you Brandy..
Date: 1/28/2020 4:38:00 PM
back with congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 4:21:00 PM
Thank you..
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