Plus1-Passion's Promise

o no she said, sweet dearly beloved- wakened desire never will die in I

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/26/2009 4:43:00 PM

Brian, another great verse form! I was told you are among the gifted ones, and the rumors were true. Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 2/26/2009 12:41:00 PM

I like this form of poetry.. I think I must give it a try.. Spirit and Soul, Constance

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/25/2009 4:39:00 PM

Thie sentiment is lovely Brian. I love the effect of reversing the plus1. A great twist on this neat little form. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Glad to hear your flowers are starting to bloom. It is warming a bit here! Love, Robin

Sandra Hudson

Date: 2/25/2009 3:15:00 PM

Clever creativity, but you always flabbergast me with your talents.-Always Alexandra

David Welch

Date: 2/25/2009 2:00:00 PM

That is cool

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/25/2009 11:55:00 AM

I really like this form and the shape it takes - reminds me of a sail on a sail boat - great job on this Brian - God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/25/2009 8:19:00 AM

This is a new form to me, Brian....I love the form "almost" as much as the poem itself.. so wonderful :) ~ Best regards...Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/25/2009 4:47:00 AM

Love the form, flow and directness of this write. great stuff! Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/25/2009 4:03:00 AM

This si a wonderful form Brian.. love the smoothness of the piece.

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/25/2009 3:13:00 AM

Everything about this is brilliant. So creative in presentation, form and content. Love it! Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/25/2009 2:22:00 AM

Love the form Brian, very cool.