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my flower ... she sang for me - ONLY for me always in Japanese … I did not know the words I never asked her to translate nor did I want the jagged crimping of my own tongue to ever attempt the exquisite phrasing of her dialect … the notes were enough their tone and timbre, a rhapsody, divine a sacred tome - a spellbinding tale that ran swift through my marrow like Autumn’s rain through a rill - that grasped me ... plucked the fibers of my being decanted my very soul and poured me out with an ache I'd never known an ache of passion - the purest, most perfect passion like a nightingale singing for its mate, long lost or the belly-laugh of a child … it brought tears to us both a delicate weep that christened our kiss - swirled in the bittersweet mix of our mouths ... and no matter their origin - whatever the mystery that bled brine from her eyes was gifted to me in each tender press of lips and drowned in the warm, dark depths of her secrets … and the love we made ... by moonlight.

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Date: 3/16/2021 10:19:00 PM
Wonderful and romantic, Greg, good to read you again:) I see this has won, congratulations:)
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Date: 3/9/2021 5:26:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this excellent Free Verse, lovely image _Constance
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Date: 3/8/2021 5:55:00 PM
A true and immensely well crafted romantic free verse poem. One that gives such deeply passionate and sensual verses! a fav- a true gem my friend. God bless..
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Date: 3/8/2021 1:37:00 PM
So gorgeous and romantic, Greg. I love this one!! It's awesome to see you putting up new poems!
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Date: 3/6/2021 6:38:00 AM
A fave! Romantic, melodic, sentimental! Sometimes we crave the expression that we dare not translate...just lean back and enjoy! God bless you, dear heart!
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Date: 3/6/2021 5:58:00 AM
WoW! Gregory, I found your well write to be mysterious, passionate and very message. Love will prevail over our differences. I enjoyed the read. Excellent job. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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