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Please Remember Me

Please remember me when I am gone,I no longer have the strength or courage to move on. Please remember me and all the good things I have done, I'm unable to enjoy my life.and have nowhere else to run. Please remember me and all the good times that we shared, don't think that I will forget how much that you all cared. Please remember me I will be watching from above,and know that I will always be sending you my love. Please remember me and I don't want you to cry,I just couldn't go on with my life and it was time to say goodbye. Colleen Marie Bono

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2014 12:18:00 AM
Looks like a good requiem poem.
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:01:00 PM
Congrats on your brilliant write. AO
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:49:00 PM
Nice rhyme and meter Congrats on being featured. Check out my "When You Think of Me," it's a death poem too.
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:50:00 AM
Awesome poem feature this week, Colleen. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 2/10/2010 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem on the Soup this week Colleen.. an amazing write and a wonderful choice to feature, my friend...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/10/2010 4:57:00 AM
Dear Colleen, Bravo Congratulations on YOUR POEM " Please Remember Me " being Featured this week I see YOU have toned down the dark part of YOUR Self But " I just couldn't go on with my life and it was time to say Goodbye " I am not willing to say Goodbye right now so YOU will have to continue to Awe me with YOUR POETRY I stand beside YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/8/2010 2:33:00 PM
congrats on the featured poem!!
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry Colleen >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Coleen. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:56:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/7/2010 2:51:00 PM
Congrats Colleen on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice.. double congrats on featured poem and new Grandma status .. kiss that baby boy from the "Sweetheart" ... luv..
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Date: 12/2/2009 2:17:00 PM
very well writen but why leave? we just met. john
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:36:00 PM
This poem is very intense...Whew, beads of sweat drip down my cheek.. Oh, that is a tear for you.....Keep your head up mama....:JP]
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Date: 11/24/2009 1:25:00 PM
wow this is incredable i feel like saying this sometimes *hugs* it will get better
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Colleen. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:41:00 PM
Nice piece Colleen, a warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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