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Play On Words

Write here, right now. Write now, right here!
Capture the moment while it's near 
and seize the day. You now know how: 
write now, right here; write here, right now. 

The rhyme is tight. The time is right 
to write some rhyme this time of night – 
a rite of writing, lacking light. 
The time is right, the rhyme is tight. 

Another draft you craft in ink. 
No lucre comes from thoughts you think;
though relatives may think you daft,
you craft in ink another draft. 

All you can see you then can say. 
At dawn, as dark dissolves to day, 
with light, you write. In poetry, 
you then can say all you can see.
 
The play’s the thing, you need to play 
with words. Then, playfully they say 
what makes the heart smile, cry, or sing;
you need to play, the play’s the thing.
 
Now play on words and let them dance
in rhymes and rhythms of romance; 
teach them to sing like carefree birds
and let them dance. Now play on, words!

[swap quatrain] 
written 18 July 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Stasukevich Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 4:39 AM
You made me smile! A fav
Ashley Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Dear Prof. PoBro, oh how I love how you play with words! Your poetic finesse and creative word craft gives me goosebumps and smiles! This swap rhyme, with its deft punctuation, is the perfect vehicle for your poem on a fast track rhythm with imaginative turns of phrases and word pairings that thrill me to no end from the first line to the last. “Rite of writing” is incredible! Such a pleasure to read this treasure! A fav! Congratulations on your excellent win in Mark’s contest. So awesome to share the podium with you, John. Your poetic gift outshines!! Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~ your PS-PS
Kauffman Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 10:15 AM
John, this write is so right to be on the winner's list! I loved it the first time I read it and had the distinct pleasure of reading it again! Words at play indeed! Line after line of delight! Congratulations on your win dear friend and R&R Bro! Blessings of grace on wings of peace!
Kauffman Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Looks like the Friars may again be in the running! Giants have definitely faded. So much fun to have an R&R Bro to run the bases with! Can't believe tomorrow is SEPTEMBER!!! It seems like yesterday that it was Opening Day! Sending you blessings that soar like a walk off grand slam dear friend!
Watt Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Samba, thanks for rounding the bases with me (again!) Your visits and re-visits are always a delight to my heart. Thank you for joining me in the spirit of playfulness. Hope you are enjoying the closing days of summer! Monday blessings ~ R&Rbro
Lane Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 3:14 AM
John, you certainly know how to play with words, whether in fun or in deep thought of beautiful love poems. Congratulations on being on the winning list.
Watt Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Thank you for the lovely visit, Lin! A little play is a good thing... a lesson I have been unable to shake since kindergarten! Have a great day ~ John
Toney Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 11:09 AM
John, what?! This is great fun, John! You made my day! I feel that it's best read at a fast pace :) I picture Tarrant Hightopp (a/k/a The Mad Hatter) delivering this perfectly without a hitch. This is a Fav Poem for me so I can become fluent and proficient in its delivery ;) Congratulations on your win on Mile 12 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 13 has already started!
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 6:09 PM
I'm so glad you like this, Mark, and thank you for honoring it with a fave and a win. I don't know Tarrant Hightopp, but I think it would be fun to hear this one read by a gifted actor. Looking forward to reading the poems on your winners' list.
La France Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 8:02 AM
John, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 6:12 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful comment and congrats, Constance
Proxenos Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 11:33 AM
This poem I really love, my style of poetry, its' fun', has a funky beat, wonderful rhyme and rhythm and just a fantastic write. Congratulations dear friend on Poetry Soups selection of this well written poem,for their 2nd Anthology. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kulkarni Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Such a fun, rhythmic rhyme you have for us!! Thank you for sharing John!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:54 AM
yet another fave of mine. I think in the end, just choose the three that are all very different from each other. Although I love Allies, I would say right now it's between this one and the other two I told you.
Canna Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 9:45 AM
This made me laugh and feel light. Thank you for writing something fun and sharing with us!
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:50 PM
dropping back with many congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
Kingston Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Seize the day! Carpe Diem. Sing, and play, rhyme and dance! Hooray! This poem made me feel good :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations, John, on this beautiful piece with word play. It is amazing, Dear Friend - definitely to my fave. "teach them to sing like carefree birds" - Enjoyed every line, especially this one. Love ~ Mala
Hladky Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 2:36 PM
I really love this poem and the clever word play that makes poetry so fun to write, and read! You hit on a key element of poetry, for me anyway: to let the words on the page come to life and inspire new possibilities and direction. Congratulations!
Mcconnell Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 1:24 PM
Great penning John, a really wonderful piece of work that enthralls one's identity. Hope all is well with you American west coast. Blessings always, Gordon
Peck Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 9:29 AM
What a wonderful ode to words! Congratulations for a best new poem.
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:32 AM
Wonderful Word Play. Congratulations on your deserved win!
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 4:20 PM
I am so glad I faved this one. It was one of my very favorites in this category. Congrats on the HM, my friend.
Kauffman Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 3:38 PM
And for the starting roster comes a 30 game winning pitcher! The crowd goes wild and in the press box they "write now, right here, write here, right now!" This is classic John Watt dear friend! So happy to see your pen back in action and off the IL! Congrats, kudos and high fives dear friend. Many blessings! The soul of the poet emerges again! Relief!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/creative-story/write. I Love This Line, "Now play on words and let them dance." So True, Let Them Dance. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Anderson Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Hey! Congratulations for your winning place in the Word Play Poems, Play-on-Words, Contest. Well Done. I loved your poem and really enjoyed reading it.I hope you enjoyed the writing challenge. Great fun indeed! Cheers and Best Wishes!
Sands Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 2:37 PM
This is great John and inspiring. I love it :)
Faulkner Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 5:11 PM
This has infectious energy and a mesmerizing toe tapping beat, it just overflows with the pure joy of finding the right words in that dazzling dance of muses, superb!
Daniel Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 1:00 AM
This is absolutely fantastic work, John, I faved it:) I love this, especially the first two stanzas:)
Proxenos Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 12:23 PM
YOU DESCRIBE A POETS MIND PERFECTLY MY FRIEND - WE DO PLAY WITH WORDS, AS THEY PLAY WITH US. A HISTORIC WRITE FOREVER TO LIVE IN POETIC RIGHT. HUGS AND BLESSINGS JOHN, JENNIFER.
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