Get Your Premium Membership

Play On Words

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like John Watt.


Write here, right now. Write now, right here! Capture the moment while it's near and seize the day. You now know how: write now, right here; write here, right now. The rhyme is tight. The time is right to write some rhyme this time of night – a rite of writing, lacking light. The time is right, the rhyme is tight. Another draft you craft in ink. No lucre comes from thoughts you think; though relatives may think you daft, you craft in ink another draft. All you can see you then can say. At dawn, as dark dissolves to day, with light, you write. In poetry, you then can say all you can see. The play’s the thing, you need to play with words. Then, playfully they say what makes the heart smile, cry, or sing; you need to play, the play’s the thing. Now play on words and let them dance in rhymes and rhythms of romance; teach them to sing like carefree birds and let them dance. Now play on, words! [swap quatrain] written 18 July 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 5/27/2023 4:39:00 AM
You made me smile! A fav
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2022 10:24:00 AM
Dear Prof. PoBro, oh how I love how you play with words! Your poetic finesse and creative word craft gives me goosebumps and smiles! This swap rhyme, with its deft punctuation, is the perfect vehicle for your poem on a fast track rhythm with imaginative turns of phrases and word pairings that thrill me to no end from the first line to the last. “Rite of writing” is incredible! Such a pleasure to read this treasure! A fav! Congratulations on your excellent win in Mark’s contest. So awesome to share the podium with you, John. Your poetic gift outshines!! Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~ your PS-PS
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2022 10:15:00 AM
John, this write is so right to be on the winner's list! I loved it the first time I read it and had the distinct pleasure of reading it again! Words at play indeed! Line after line of delight! Congratulations on your win dear friend and R&R Bro! Blessings of grace on wings of peace!
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/31/2022 1:10:00 PM
Looks like the Friars may again be in the running! Giants have definitely faded. So much fun to have an R&R Bro to run the bases with! Can't believe tomorrow is SEPTEMBER!!! It seems like yesterday that it was Opening Day! Sending you blessings that soar like a walk off grand slam dear friend!
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 8/29/2022 10:31:00 AM
Samba, thanks for rounding the bases with me (again!) Your visits and re-visits are always a delight to my heart. Thank you for joining me in the spirit of playfulness. Hope you are enjoying the closing days of summer! Monday blessings ~ R&Rbro
Date: 8/28/2022 3:14:00 AM
John, you certainly know how to play with words, whether in fun or in deep thought of beautiful love poems. Congratulations on being on the winning list.
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 8/29/2022 10:19:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely visit, Lin! A little play is a good thing... a lesson I have been unable to shake since kindergarten! Have a great day ~ John
Date: 8/26/2022 11:09:00 AM
John, what?! This is great fun, John! You made my day! I feel that it's best read at a fast pace :) I picture Tarrant Hightopp (a/k/a The Mad Hatter) delivering this perfectly without a hitch. This is a Fav Poem for me so I can become fluent and proficient in its delivery ;) Congratulations on your win on Mile 12 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 13 has already started!
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 8/26/2022 6:09:00 PM
I'm so glad you like this, Mark, and thank you for honoring it with a fave and a win. I don't know Tarrant Hightopp, but I think it would be fun to hear this one read by a gifted actor. Looking forward to reading the poems on your winners' list.
Date: 8/26/2022 8:02:00 AM
John, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 8/26/2022 6:12:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful comment and congrats, Constance
Date: 1/24/2022 11:33:00 AM
This poem I really love, my style of poetry, its' fun', has a funky beat, wonderful rhyme and rhythm and just a fantastic write. Congratulations dear friend on Poetry Soups selection of this well written poem,for their 2nd Anthology. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2021 10:59:00 AM
Such a fun, rhythmic rhyme you have for us!! Thank you for sharing John!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/12/2021 10:54:00 AM
yet another fave of mine. I think in the end, just choose the three that are all very different from each other. Although I love Allies, I would say right now it's between this one and the other two I told you.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/31/2021 9:45:00 AM
This made me laugh and feel light. Thank you for writing something fun and sharing with us!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 4:50:00 PM
dropping back with many congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 4:04:00 PM
Seize the day! Carpe Diem. Sing, and play, rhyme and dance! Hooray! This poem made me feel good :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations, John, on this beautiful piece with word play. It is amazing, Dear Friend - definitely to my fave. "teach them to sing like carefree birds" - Enjoyed every line, especially this one. Love ~ Mala
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 2:36:00 PM
I really love this poem and the clever word play that makes poetry so fun to write, and read! You hit on a key element of poetry, for me anyway: to let the words on the page come to life and inspire new possibilities and direction. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 1:24:00 PM
Great penning John, a really wonderful piece of work that enthralls one's identity. Hope all is well with you American west coast. Blessings always, Gordon
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 9:29:00 AM
What a wonderful ode to words! Congratulations for a best new poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 4:32:00 AM
Wonderful Word Play. Congratulations on your deserved win!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2021 4:20:00 PM
I am so glad I faved this one. It was one of my very favorites in this category. Congrats on the HM, my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2021 3:38:00 PM
And for the starting roster comes a 30 game winning pitcher! The crowd goes wild and in the press box they "write now, right here, write here, right now!" This is classic John Watt dear friend! So happy to see your pen back in action and off the IL! Congrats, kudos and high fives dear friend. Many blessings! The soul of the poet emerges again! Relief!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2021 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/creative-story/write. I Love This Line, "Now play on words and let them dance." So True, Let Them Dance. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2021 2:55:00 PM
Hey! Congratulations for your winning place in the Word Play Poems, Play-on-Words, Contest. Well Done. I loved your poem and really enjoyed reading it.I hope you enjoyed the writing challenge. Great fun indeed! Cheers and Best Wishes!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2021 2:37:00 PM
This is great John and inspiring. I love it :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2021 5:11:00 PM
This has infectious energy and a mesmerizing toe tapping beat, it just overflows with the pure joy of finding the right words in that dazzling dance of muses, superb!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2021 1:00:00 AM
This is absolutely fantastic work, John, I faved it:) I love this, especially the first two stanzas:)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/20/2021 12:23:00 PM
YOU DESCRIBE A POETS MIND PERFECTLY MY FRIEND - WE DO PLAY WITH WORDS, AS THEY PLAY WITH US. A HISTORIC WRITE FOREVER TO LIVE IN POETIC RIGHT. HUGS AND BLESSINGS JOHN, JENNIFER.
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things