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A collaboration we did couple of months ago to raise awareness on Narcissistic Abuse. October is the month for domestic violence awareness too, and Narcissistic abuse is an insidious form of domestic violence, so many suffer in silence and are caught in the trap of violence. There's no gender for domestic violence. And if you are in an abusive relationship, remember you are not alone, seek help although it isnt easy to break free from the chains of a narcissist.

Plastic Narcissist Collaboration With the Silent One

When we search for answers from egotistic minds,
life is full of meaningless questions that lead us nowhere.
You sabotaged the sandman who brought me my dreams,
corrupting and confusing the clarity of my conscience.
In a world of betrayal, I thought you were my
saviour,
but your promises were sworn from a throne of lies -
where you perch as the king of false pretences.

Tired from being a victim of your insecurities, 
I am not your mistake nor your abandoned
trauma.
Fate led my empathic sanity into your labyrinth of splintered hollowness,
confining me within a soulless sphere of unfair
madness,
yet, I still remember how you pledged to show me the moon -
falsehoods which led to an eternal eclipse for my eyes.

You stole the silver sewn with perfectly metered syllables,
calming the storm I carry in cacophonous silence,
but now, all I see is a megalomaniac monster, draped in rose tones of synthetic rhodolite, pretending to be an ivory dove in a horizon of vicious vultures,
hiding behind a decaying province of black petunias.
Your synthetic smile veils your cruel character, afraid that the vermilion you paint across your
sunsets,
will reveal the poison you fed my paralyzed soul.
My ink will always portray your true parasite persona,
about your attempts to assassinate my authentic aroma,
as now i blossom in meadows without your
toxic touch.

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Bill Baker Date: 10/27/2023 5:03:00 PM WOW! You two are awesome poetry collaborators. Hard to determine who wrote what it is so smooth verse to verse. Every relationship needs to offer free expression of each other's authentic self. Over-stepping to the point of restricting one person's growth for the satisfaction of your on growth is narcissistic. There's always room for compromise in a Love relationship. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your collaborative efforts, Ink Empress, and Silent One. A blessing to us all. Bill Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 10/23/2023 4:59:00 PM A dynamic write here, you both! It has so much truth in it. You both do so well. :) Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/22/2023 5:04:00 PM It’s so sad when someone gets caught in a narcissist trap, it’s happening to someone very close to me who we now never get to see or even hear from. This is wonderful collaboration Ink, well done to you and Silent One… Belle Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/20/2023 3:27:00 PM no one can assassinate your authentic talent nor your golden heart, keep writing like this, you illumine my mind every time. :) Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 3:18:00 AM Awwn sweet rose you are so kind, thank you so much

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/20/2023 2:36:00 PM Ink, a powerful poem and thought provoking, a well penned collaboration. Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 3:19:00 AM Thank you for reading, Tania

I Am Anaya Date: 10/20/2023 10:58:00 AM Stunning, Ink/SO Important subject, awareness. Watch "13 Reasons Why" I kept thinking about things around me, how we never know when things affect others. fav "You sabotaged the sandman who brought me my dreams, corrupting and confusing the clarity of my conscience" this really resonates with me. "yet, I still remember how you pledged to show me the moon - falsehoods which led to an eternal eclipse for my eyes" "...my authentic aroma<--love the most. Phenomenal poetry! Jaw-dropping! xoxo Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 3:20:00 AM Awwn thank you always kind soul for your generous and thoughtful feedback that always leaves my heart full! I appreciate your visits and encouraging words always

Eve Roper Date: 10/20/2023 10:00:00 AM Such a deep verse of a human causing pain and suffering. Well written, full of emotion and imagery, . God bless Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 3:20:00 AM Thank you so very much kind soul appreciate your feedback

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/20/2023 7:54:00 AM Your inks will always break the silence of pain and trauma and raise the voice of awareness to its highest in so powerful a word sharp enough to become the sword that will carve a huge abode so safe and secure for all those who dwell in a world of turmoil and security.. dear Empress and Silent One, you have displayed an evil side of emotions and thoughts into so wonderful work! A poetic collaboration of great value! And so much pleased to read! God bless your beautiful souls.. My deepest regards Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 4:01:00 AM Thank you so very much for your kind and encouraging words, truly you’ve left my heart beaming and warm with your sincere support that truly is uplifting! Grateful for your poetic presence,

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/20/2023 7:28:00 AM A powerful poem, Ink and SO--domestic violence and abuse--a curse on humanity. So many stunning lines articulate and enhance your potent theme. In a world of betrayal, I thought you were my savior, but your promises were sworn from a throne of lies where you perch as the king of false pretenses---eloquently said! Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 4:02:00 AM Thank you so very much Vijay for your kind and generous support always. Truly grateful for your sincere and warm poetic presence

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/20/2023 7:11:00 AM Narcissism is always devoid of seriousness. A labyrinth of splintered hollowness, Great collaboration. Blesings Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 4:04:00 AM Thank you so much Victor

Lin Lane Date: 10/20/2023 6:13:00 AM Nothing grows in a toxic environment, Ink. Nothing and no one should be allowed to sabotage a dream. A worthwhile collaboration, both of you. Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 4:05:00 AM So true dear Lin Lane, i appreciate your visit and feedback truly, thank you

Valsa George Date: 10/20/2023 5:49:00 AM How empathetic you are and how expertly you can step into the shoes of others. Such abuses are so very rampant these days. Many of those who are thus victimised never tell it out either due to fear or a kind of shame on being exposed. So the narcissts thrive unscathed. At the beginning they will lure with false promises. Only later their true colors come out. The frustration and life long trauma of all those who are thus being deceived are so powerfully detailed by both of you. As before, another wonderful collaboration! ".....all I see is a megalomaniac monster, draped in rose tones of synthetic rhodolite, pretending to be an ivory dove in a horizon of vicious vultures, hiding behind a decaying province of black petunias." How can anyone rate these lines other than with a wide mouthed exclamation... Wow! Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/21/2023 4:35:00 AM Awwn thank you so much dear beautiful soul, youv said it all so right, sadly i know so many too thats in the same situation. I appreciate your feedback and also you picking out the lines you liked. You’ve actually pointed out my lines in this collaboration so grateful to always hear from you. Sending you light always

Sotto Poet Date: 10/20/2023 5:29:00 AM The teamwork of two brilliant poets, Ink and Silent One, is incredible. Your words and imagery seamlessly sync, bringing to life the awful truth of Narcissistic Abuse. I am greatly impressed by your skill and accuracy; this piece is truly remarkable. I admire every line as you have absolutely honed the art of portraying this agonizing feeling with great finesse and clarity. Alliteration is here as well, making your work a genuine masterpiece, an ode to the perfect synergy of two brilliant artists. Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/20/2023 5:04:00 AM Wow wow wow!!! I'm speechless.Everytime you both collaborate, it always results in a magnificent masterpiece, honestly! Being in a narcissistic relationship is really traumatic & true, it isn't easy to break from their chains. together.No matter what, their negative aura never truly hides.You both have described the angst, ache, vulnerability and torment here so well..With amazing poetic skills, spectacular vocabulary and impactful depth of emotions. Seriously, both of your words flow impeccably Login to Reply Hiya Sharma Date: 10/20/2023 5:06:00 AM "You stole the silver sewn with perfectly metered syllables, calming the storm I carry in cacophonous silence", "but now, all I see is a megalomaniac monster, draped in rose tones of synthetic rhodolite, pretending to be an ivory dove in a horizon of vicious vultures, hiding behind a decaying province of black petunias" Gosh, absolutely love this!!! "Fate led my empathic sanity into your labyrinth of splintered hollowness, confining me within a soulless sphere of unfair madness" So evocative how it's been described that they make false promises and pretend to be pure, only to lead us to an eternal eclipse.. A brilliant write, you both are my inspiration! Keep writing and shining always..

Lioness Onpaper Date: 10/20/2023 1:38:00 AM In a world of betrayal, I thought you were my savior,!!! Exactly!! your promises were sworn from a throne of lies .. ooo the line is on fireeeeee… pretending to be an ivory dove in a horizon of vicious vultures,!! This is the idiot’s slogan!!! This piece is amazing!!! I love the accuracy!!! Every line is making clap !!! Now this is art expresssed in the finest ink! Tooled by the perfect artists !!! Amazing collaboration !! Login to Reply