Plastic Gestures

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The trash has been removed by wind and truck, by hands 
much smaller and hearts much larger than his.
The twinkling lights no longer shine on the tree
or in my eyes. Scourer of malls, hunter of treasures
magpie to the crownless king, reveling in his “just” deserts?

The cold, meaningless, plastic gesture of his disregard lay 
under the barren Xmas tree, barren, as his love for me.
His treasures piled high, exquisitely dripping with each
memorized desire, truffles melting on his thoughtless tongue,
scrapbook memories litter the pointless horizon.

Soon, he would  attempt to hurl three decades of subservient
gestures out, out like the small flame of love left, in the empty
space which was my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/30/2015 10:19:00 AM
Nothing quite so forlorn as a bare and browning Christmas tree. Congrats. Love, daver
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:52:00 AM
Debbie - what a truly great piece about the breakdown of love. I loved reading it - as always. Love Janette
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:52:00 AM
Debbie - what a truly great piece about the breakdown of love. I loved reading it - as always. Love Janette
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Date: 6/30/2011 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie for your win in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2011 3:43:00 PM
My tardy congrats on your win..this is truly heart rendering. BG
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:26:00 PM
wow, a marriage gone very sour. this is a very unique and wonderful way to depict it. LOVE it. This for me is deep poetry written with clarity. What I wish people would understand when I tell them I like good poetry that also can be understood! Congrats on your win,Deb.
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:23:00 PM
oooh wow, debs! missed entering this one! really grutty and sweer cheers! :) huggs
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:04:00 AM
well done. I really do love this poem.1st rate.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/10/2011 9:39:00 AM
so kind of you Robert, divorce is a true death, don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise...Light & Love
Date: 6/10/2011 5:52:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your first place win in Brian's contest.. nice to be sharing the top with u luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Guzzi
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie,on your win in Joyce Johnson's contest "Emotional Response". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:38:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Joyce's contest with this dynamic entry .. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:59:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:34:00 PM
Nice entry Debbie. Congratulations to you for winning in Joyce's contest.
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:26:00 PM
Such beautiful images debbie.Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:08:00 PM
oh my! supercalifragisticexpialidocious, lights! special CHEERS for the big-time win! :) biting and stunning! ...huggs, nette
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your great poem Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/15/2011 8:16:00 AM
......oooops...just popping in here to say thank you for liking my ECLIPSE poem.....I always feel others are much better than me in any given contest, for example (out of many, many who could be mentioned) Nette Onclaud, whose stuff I always admire.....thanks again...sincerely..... Syd
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Date: 2/15/2011 7:40:00 AM
is this for Joyce's contest, if so this is a fantastic entry, if not it's just fantastic
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