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Plastic Gestures

The trash has been removed by wind and truck, by hands 
much smaller and hearts much larger than his.
The twinkling lights no longer shine on the tree
or in my eyes. Scourer of malls, hunter of treasures
magpie to the crownless king, reveling in his “just” deserts?

The cold, meaningless, plastic gesture of his disregard lay 
under the barren Xmas tree, barren, as his love for me.
His treasures piled high, exquisitely dripping with each
memorized desire, truffles melting on his thoughtless tongue,
scrapbook memories litter the pointless horizon.

Soon, he would  attempt to hurl three decades of subservient
gestures out, out like the small flame of love left, in the empty
space which was my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Nothing quite so forlorn as a bare and browning Christmas tree. Congrats. Love, daver
Fisher Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Debbie - what a truly great piece about the breakdown of love. I loved reading it - as always. Love Janette
Fisher Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Debbie - what a truly great piece about the breakdown of love. I loved reading it - as always. Love Janette
Brown Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations Debbie for your win in the contest. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 3:43 PM
My tardy congrats on your win..this is truly heart rendering. BG
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 1:26 PM
wow, a marriage gone very sour. this is a very unique and wonderful way to depict it. LOVE it. This for me is deep poetry written with clarity. What I wish people would understand when I tell them I like good poetry that also can be understood! Congrats on your win,Deb.
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 12:23 PM
oooh wow, debs! missed entering this one! really grutty and sweer cheers! :) huggs
Smith Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:04 AM
well done. I really do love this poem.1st rate.
Guzzi Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 9:39 AM
so kind of you Robert, divorce is a true death, don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise...Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 5:52 AM
Congrats Debbie on your first place win in Brian's contest.. nice to be sharing the top with u luv..
Agba Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on your win, Guzzi
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations Debbie,on your win in Joyce Johnson's contest "Emotional Response". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Joyce's contest with this dynamic entry .. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..
Taylor Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Nice entry Debbie. Congratulations to you for winning in Joyce's contest.
Mannan Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:26 PM
Such beautiful images debbie.Many warm congrats for this win.
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:08 PM
oh my! supercalifragisticexpialidocious, lights! special CHEERS for the big-time win! :) biting and stunning! ...huggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Congratulations on your great poem Debbie. Love, Joyce
Beck Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 8:16 AM
......oooops...just popping in here to say thank you for liking my ECLIPSE poem.....I always feel others are much better than me in any given contest, for example (out of many, many who could be mentioned) Nette Onclaud, whose stuff I always admire.....thanks again...sincerely..... Syd
Roberts Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 7:40 AM
is this for Joyce's contest, if so this is a fantastic entry, if not it's just fantastic
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