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Planeteering

orange swirls from dusty footing hiking up to Mars’s mountain peaks and caps and canyons crying out for days of gravel pounding edges ledges handhold wedges reddish sun through reddish mist of burning sand in drought-filled land all cracked in lack of water’s snack backed and packed for planeteering Venus next tomorrow morning

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Date: 12/17/2023 2:54:00 PM
perfect title that drew me into your 'sci-fi' poem. Planeteering would be the experience of a life time...I enjoyed this creation of 'astronomical' proportions :-) smiles...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/17/2023 3:02:00 PM
I forgot I wrote this one, found it looking back at my old stuff, I remember coming up with the title first then writing a poem that suited it. Thanks Sara
Date: 12/17/2023 2:29:00 PM
Hey, can I come? I'll bring the Doritos. On second thought, if we'll be in cramped quarters I'll make it Fritos. Nice write. I luv this scifi stuff
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/17/2023 3:02:00 PM
I don't space cruise before 8am. Just an fyi
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/17/2023 2:59:00 PM
Sure, the more the merrier, early start though mate. Thanks Tom

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