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Plaintive Trance

" How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood" Samuel Woodworth 1785 - 1842 rapt in a plaintive trance, when close my eyes,  enchanting abode appears in my dream,  surrounded by a garden ~ mesmerized ~ all around the wildflower bushes gleam ~              damsel in pretty silky cloak, blushing ~              on swing, reveling in, beside a stream.   swinging, fluttering, twirling, and prancing ~          roses beaming, dahlias frolicking ~ charming butterflies kiss, bees hovering.  warmth of lively precious friends, nostalgia endearing ~          hushed village-path, starlit sky, moon shining ~ tall trees witnessed, gleeful laughter gushing. those are the days, those are the nights, dazzling ~ in memory ~  never disappearing. November 19,2020 For Writing Challenge - Terza Rima Poetry Contest Syllables checked by howmanysyllables.com Sponsor: Constance La France December 30, 2020 For Podium Placing Promise (2) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/7/2021 8:36:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Very descriptive and creative work. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2020 11:55:00 AM
Hello Malabika. Congratulations on the win! :) Linda
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/6/2020 6:13:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. Appreciate your kindness. Love~ Mala
Date: 11/29/2020 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write.Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/29/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. Really appreciate your visiting my page, Love~ Mala
Date: 11/29/2020 1:51:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this wonderful and enchanting poem _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/29/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. Enjoyed working with the form of poetry I haven't worked before. Love ~ Mala
Date: 11/23/2020 3:14:00 PM
Hello Mala, did you have a good Thanksgiving Day celebration? You really had a very good childhood. Enjoy your evening my friend. Do you celebrate Christmas?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/25/2020 11:05:00 AM
Hello Mala Oh i am pleased to hear that you had a good thanksgiving celebration. Oh I am glad you celebrate Christmas. Hugs Darlene. Love.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/24/2020 4:17:00 PM
Yes, Darlene, we had a good Thanksgiving. I celebrate Christmas too. You are right - I had a beautiful childhood, especially when I spent a few years in a countryside. Can't forget those marvellous experiences, Love ~ Mala
Date: 11/19/2020 6:54:00 AM
A very good poem in response to the quote.. The imagery is just so vivid... You write so well..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/19/2020 7:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. It feels great to bring back the childhood days. Appreciate your encouraging comments ~ Mala
Date: 11/19/2020 6:53:00 AM
Spectacular imagery! Vivid scenes of the past...Thank you for bringing us back to your golden days...so lovely dear Mala..Best wishes in the contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/19/2020 7:15:00 AM
Dear JCB, thank you so much. Yeah, those were the golden days! Love~ Mala
Date: 11/18/2020 6:19:00 PM
Your gorgeous imagery makes this a memorable poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/19/2020 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. It's so sweet of you to visit my page, leave an inspiring comment. Your comments are valuable in my path, really appreciate your kindness ~ Mala

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