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(Mother, Winifred Christine Stainbrook-Etgen)

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I wrote this poem as a remembrance of my mother. Even when macular degeneration and diabetes took her eyesight, she continued playing her beloved piano. I often sat adjacent to her, watching her arthritic fingers dance pirouettes across the 88 ‘blacks and whites,’ lost in creativity and the music. Her pain temporarily dissolved, and she was at peace in her musical heaven, soulfully content.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ She walks into the empty room and sits down on the stool; her heart engulfed with grief and gloom from life that has been both kind and cruel. She knows that she must persevere though things seem dark and grey; then wipes away a single tear as she begins to play. Familiar music soon takes flight, her sorrows start to lift; and so she plays into the night and feels the music’s gift. At last, she plays a soft reprise and feels her gloom depart; true solace found in ivory keys that mend her broken heart!

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Date: 1/16/2024 9:44:00 AM
she played the piano too? This is so touching, i didnt read this before but the graceful way youv described your mother and how music was her catharsis is beyond impeccable and beautiful to read, she is so beautiful i love the picture youv used here and also the lines that stood out the most was “ her heart engulfed with grief and gloom from life that has been both kind and cruel.“ sigh!! I felt this so very much. And i see how you felt your mothers emotions as a child, FAVE! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/16/2024 12:21:00 AM
Oooh ~ so beautiful and yet painful, a sublime write, Sara, exquisite tribute to your Mom. Warmest congratulations on your win, in Brian’s contest
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/16/2024 4:40:00 AM
thank you for your mindful comments and compliments, Unseeking. I appreciate your visit...and thanks for the congratulatory words. I'm delighted. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 1/14/2024 4:01:00 PM
So touching and heart felt, with such delicate memories of one so precious to you. Sara this is a stunning poem brimming with love and admiration for your lovely Mother. Your line "life has been kind and cruel" are the words behind so many who have managed to persevere. Thank you for your wonderful poem dear one.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/14/2024 4:50:00 PM
thank you, SV, for your lovely and kind comments about my poem. You're insightful and wise in recognizing the value of the words 'life has been kind and cruel.' My mother was a stoic and persevered up to the very end. Have a blessed week, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 7:43:00 PM
Such feeling finding its way out in your words Sara and, in between, the echo of your mothers music accompanying you....an exquisite combination.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/14/2024 5:11:00 AM
oh Paul, your words were delightful to read this morning. Thank you for the kind and positive thoughts and words, succinctly said, I might add. Wishing you a wonderful Sunday, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 1:00:00 PM
- Wonderful words in memory of your beautiful mother ... I'm sure you can still hear her playing, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 4:57:00 PM
you're right, Anne-Lise, I can still hear her playing Claire de Lune. thanks for the visit and comments, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 10:39:00 AM
Music certainly is soothing. I think it should continue to be taught in schools. Thank you for this poem and for sharing your memories.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 4:57:00 PM
I agree, Hilda. Music is required in all middle schools here in Texas. I appreciate your visit and your comments. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 10:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I also developed macular degeneration. Retinal shots every month gives me vision for a while to dream.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 4:58:00 PM
oh, I'm sorry to hear about your macular degeneration. I'm grateful to learn that retinol shots give your eyes a temporary clarity. Bless your heart. Have a wonderful evening, Sara PS thanks for sharing.
Date: 1/13/2024 9:15:00 AM
An exquisite homage to your beloved mother dear Sara, there exists no parallel to the ethereal allure of music, for it possesses an unrivaled ability to infuse elation into the depths of one's very being. Alas, the lamentable affliction that befell her, rendering her bereft of sight, undoubtedly plunged her into the throes of arduous adversity.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 5:01:00 PM
thanks, kind Sotto, for your visit and for your insightful comments. I agree with you about the alluring power of music...you're also right...my mother's lamentable affliction plunged her into periods of depression. Music gave her hope and soothed her soul. Thank you for visit and mindful comments. Grateful for you. Have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 8:29:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Sara, nothing beats music to bring joy to the soul. Such a shame that she lost her sight, it must have been such a struggle for her. Hope you're having a nice weekend. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 5:03:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Tom, and for your kind words. I agree, music brings joy to the soul...I believe its brought to us by the Divine when we need it. Yes, my mother struggled so with her affliction and would become depressed. Playing music soothed her soul...it was as if it connected her to heaven itself. Wishing you a blessed weekend, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 6:16:00 AM
Sara, outstanding, what an emotional write, I have tears after reading this ! So beautifully penned with a great depth of love. I am so sorry you mother had to endure this pain and for your grief. It is nice that her piano playing soothed her soul, a FAV, blessings, Constance
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 5:05:00 PM
I'm so grateful for your visit and comments, Constance. I, too, get teary-eyed when I think of her and her situation. I'm glad my poem captured that essence to the point that it moved you to tears. Yes, piano playing soothed her weary soul, as if in playing she touched heaven. Thanks for your visit and lovely words and for the fave. Deeply honored that you did. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 5:23:00 AM
Reminiscing in beloved memories, your poem tugs the heart. What a wonderful gift she had to soothe the soul!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 5:46:00 AM
aww, thank you! You're right, my mother always seemed to find ways to soothe her soul as well as the souls of her children. Miss her....have a splendid weekend, Sara
Date: 1/13/2024 4:34:00 AM
Such a touching and tender poem for your mum, dear Sara.. This poignant poem paints a vivid picture of a soul finding solace in the midst of sorrow through the therapeutic embrace of music. The imagery of the empty room serves as a canvas for the emotional journey.. he closing lines, describing a soft reprise and the healing touch of ivory keys mending a broken heart, are particularly evocative. It beautifully captures the cathartic and healing essence of music in the face of life's challenges.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 5:22:00 AM
thank you, Silent One, for your visit and for sharing your insights into the details of my poem. You nailed it! You're right...playing music was cathartic and healing for my mother. Have a splendid Saturday, Sara

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