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On the stage stood she, a sculpted image Charming everyone with her angelic visage With music, she began to gyrate Putting everyone into a euphoric state On her leg, as she whirled like waves of an ocean Everyone got lost in the poetry in motion! Submitted for Premier Choice No.1190 Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand Bite Size Poem No.29 Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Date: 2/24/2023 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Valsa! I can envision the dance :)
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Date: 2/24/2023 5:05:00 AM
Very nice dear friend! I feel like I am one the spectators. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:11:00 AM
Nice one Valsa! It made me laugh as I chose to try to beautify darts in the poetry in motion contest and perhaps predictably did not meet with success :D this one is lovely x
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Date: 12/8/2021 7:37:00 PM
I'd say that Line will really like this, maybe even more than I do! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 12/8/2021 3:28:00 PM
Beautiful, Valsa
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Valsa George
Date: 12/8/2021 5:59:00 PM
Very sweet of you Andrea.... Thanks a lot !
Date: 12/8/2021 10:07:00 AM
Quite a vision, but I still prefer Tahitian hula! Aloha!
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Valsa George
Date: 12/8/2021 5:58:00 PM
Thank you much Rico... you limerick master !
Date: 12/8/2021 6:26:00 AM
Charming photo of a fine ballerina. An breath-taking sight. Best for a win. ~~
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Valsa George
Date: 12/8/2021 5:57:00 PM
Glad you got a clear visual image. Very grateful to you dear Victor .
Date: 12/8/2021 5:20:00 AM
Wonderful performance you depicted, Valsa. I see her charming movements.
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Valsa George
Date: 12/8/2021 5:56:00 PM
Some dance performers leave us spell bound ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 12/8/2021 1:38:00 AM
An amazing sight Valsa, performed with beautiful precision. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 12/8/2021 5:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom.... the weaver of tales !

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