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as in younger days i see his manliness stretched out before me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/28/2023 6:03:00 AM
Oh, Kim. This gets a double sigh from me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2023 7:31:00 AM
Thank you so much! xx
Date: 9/25/2023 8:11:00 PM
20-20 vision there, Kim! Good for you! ... I always say that 'all my women' are fair-haired, thin, and rich. (Yeah, sure...) Keep smiling, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2023 7:32:00 AM
LOL…Gershon’s women…no smarter than Solomon ;)
Date: 9/25/2023 2:16:00 PM
Hi Kim, Short and erotic senryu. Great one!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2023 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Nancy!
Date: 9/24/2023 12:05:00 PM
You have always been clever with your wordplay in all your poems, this brilliant write is no exception dear Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2023 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 9/23/2023 9:50:00 AM
Sexy!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2023 9:54:00 AM
Mmm…hmm…lol! Thanks, Andrea :)
Date: 9/23/2023 7:51:00 AM
Hi Kim, This is so well done. I echo what Terry said. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2023 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 9/23/2023 7:38:00 AM
Your haiku is absolutely beautiful! You have a remarkable talent for breathing life into words, effortlessly allowing the reader to immerse themselves in the vivid imagery you create.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2023 9:41:00 AM
I appreciate you, Lasaad!
Date: 9/22/2023 4:42:00 PM
A wonderful innocent yet suggestive write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2023 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 9/22/2023 4:37:00 PM
A breathtaking image that captivates the viewer with its clever wordplay and vibrant details.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2023 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 9/22/2023 1:28:00 PM
Quite a picture, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2023 4:10:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 9/22/2023 7:03:00 AM
Some great word play here
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2023 4:10:00 PM
Thanks, John!

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