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Picking At Scabs

A musky, burnt haze sears slowly into my nostrils.  
The twilight hour pulses steadily, bathing stark walls in an eerie gloom.  
Too awake to drift to sleep, yet too tired to drag my bones off this sinking mattress.  
Thoughts cyclone like a tsunami within a withdrawn mind,  
picking at scabs; the half-life of my darkness pools in red droplets.  
Licking the wounds, the taste of metallic and melancholy blends.  
Loneliness wraps its arms around my dejected shoulders like a winding sheet.  
A howling wind rattles the paper-thin glass making up my windows,  
as I ponder how I became the living dead.  
Traumas poisoned my sanity,  
slowly paranoia replaced reason,  
delusions became my nightly bedfellow,  
whispering sweet unpleasantries into tainted ears,  
leaving hallucinatory trinkets in my repeating nightmares.  
The world is shrinking, withering,  
yet as I am becoming paralyzed by fear, I am unequipped to stop it.  
Like a freight train derailed,  
bellowing at full speed towards the inevitable,  
I too am racing at the speed of light towards oblivion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Empress Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 2:06 AM
Your voice deserves a diamond trophy grumpy! Keep doin spoken words! Congrats! Sending you light!
Jama Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 5:32 AM
Thank you Ink.
Gauthier Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 9:24 PM
what a pleasant voice ~ both eerie and charming ~
Jama Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Thank you so much.
Woods Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 8:33 AM
A very pleasant voice with just the right intonation for this poem... which btw, is excellent! Congratulations! Xo
Jama Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Thank you for the kind words.
mysore Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Oh so powerful voice. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Jama Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Thank you so much.
Jones Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Sara congrats on your win!
Jama Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Thank you very much.
Lane Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Sara, I could read this a thousand times and still not gain from it the emotions you exposed when hearing you read it. Your voice lives each tragic line.
Jama Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Thank you very much.
Tellaferro Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Awesome! This is powerful!
Jama Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Thank you very much.
Miller Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 8:15 AM
Brilliant poem, amazing reading, congratulations
Jama Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 8:55 AM
Thank you so much.
Alex Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 6:43 AM
"Thoughts cyclone like a tsunami within a withdrawn mind" - Indeed, very powerfully written. Congratulations!
Jama Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so much.
mysore Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 3:47 AM
gifted write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Jama Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Thank you so much.
Ibeh Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Sara, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this masterfully crafted poem. I loved it. Great imagery and diction!
Jama Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Thank you for placing me. And the kind words.
Empress Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Wow grumpy! Youv nailed it not with just the reading of the poem but also with how youve depicted psychosis and what it does and how it feels in such a detailed manner , brilliant metaphors and imagery and flow of your lines in this poem is seamless! I always tell you this that you should share your spoken words as you do them so wholeheartedly. And you have read more than 100s of poets on insta writing community! Maybe you should do readings for soupers? Haha! Would be so nice! FAVE. BOL!!
Jama Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Ink.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:43 PM
wow, you got such great terrorizing emotion out of that topic. Wish I could do one like that!! I'd probably just talk about how I pick at my scabs!! I bet this scores high!
Jama Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 5:47 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I bet you will write an amazing poem on the title you pick. I can't wait to read it.
Rhymes Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 12:42 PM
I could relate to this . Paranoia , delusions , and sleeplessness . Sighs . Loved reading it .
Jama Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 12:45 PM
I'm so sorry you can relate to this. Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate your support.
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