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Courage

Some thought his mind to be a tender leaf, Yet only he knew ... the battle in his mind: How oft' his mind did seek some sigh of relief From wits that grieved – a burden he did find. Pen like a wild beast, fretted his right hand, And fingers did try to tame it, with tears; Experts did warn his scribbles they would band, Not seeing the gems, concealed in briers. His fingers often blocked cascading thoughts, And heart sure wept for the unexpressed wits; His sturdy guts did fight with tangled knots And sent forces to defeat ... rivals' blitz. His life he won without laments or whines, And here, I read for you, his painful lines. * A 2nd Place (the 3rd from the top) in the following contest (judged on Jan. 16, 2021) Jan. 12, 2021 (Originally submitted on Sept. 6, 2020) Best N-A poem of 2020 Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: John Hamilton The poem was originally submitted to "Courage Poetry Contest", which was judged on Sept. 10, 2020, but I had an N-A

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Date: 1/16/2021 12:09:00 PM
Hard to believe this got an N/A, but not this time, congrats Newton on a nice win!
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Date: 1/16/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for this great placement, congrats and the complement!!

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