Courage

Some thought his mind to be a tender leaf, 
Yet only he knew ... the battle in his mind: 
How oft' his mind did seek some sigh of relief 
From wits that grieved – a burden he did find. 
Pen like a wild beast, fretted his right hand, 
And fingers did try to tame it, with tears; 
Experts did warn his scribbles they would band, 
Not seeing the gems, concealed in briers. 
His fingers often blocked cascading thoughts, 
And heart sure wept for the unexpressed wits; 
His sturdy guts did fight with tangled knots 
And sent forces to defeat ... rivals' blitz. 
   His life he won without laments or whines, 
  And here, I read for you, his painful lines.

  
* A 2nd Place (the 3rd from the top) in the following contest (judged on Jan. 16, 2021)

Jan. 12, 2021 (Originally submitted on Sept. 6, 2020) 
Best N-A poem of 2020 Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: John Hamilton


The poem was originally submitted to "Courage Poetry Contest", which was judged on Sept. 10, 2020, but I had an N-A
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Hamilton Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Hard to believe this got an N/A, but not this time, congrats Newton on a nice win!
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Thank you so much, John, for this great placement, congrats and the complement!!
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