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Photograph Frame

I
miss 
you darling.
Our wedding photo
stares at me from its silver frame.
I lovingly stroke your face, wishing it were for real.
Terminal cancer tore you from my arms, but you live in my heart till the day I die.

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*real counted as 1 syllable as per soup counter – how many syllables shows 2

01~26~17

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Paulette Calasibetta Date: 2/10/2017 12:51:00 PM Jan, Congratulations on your poignant, sad and beautiful piece! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/10/2017 1:09:00 PM Thanks so much Paulette:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Martin Date: 2/6/2017 11:37:00 AM Congratulations Jan! :-) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/7/2017 4:33:00 PM Many thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe Date: 2/3/2017 6:44:00 PM Beautiful and sad, Jan - congrats on your win! Agnes Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/7/2017 4:34:00 PM Many thanks Agnes I hope you are well:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/2/2017 10:12:00 PM Congrats, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2017 2:29:00 AM Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France Date: 2/2/2017 7:16:00 PM Jan, congratulations on Third Place in my Contest F, a very emotional write ~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2017 2:29:00 AM Oh thanks so much Constance I really enjoyed writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish Date: 1/30/2017 9:24:00 PM Cancer - what a scourge! I had it a number of years ago but thanks to a fine surgeon I am now O.K. Your work is quite moving. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/31/2017 2:05:00 PM Great news about your health Matthew, my hubby is also fine after his surgery:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White Date: 1/28/2017 1:25:00 AM Aww, another Fibonacci, love, love, love :) I am so happy to know this is fictional tho..... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/28/2017 12:02:00 PM It's not a form I have written often and am pleased with the way it turned out:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May Date: 1/27/2017 9:57:00 AM A heartfelt write Jan...best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/27/2017 12:19:00 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Tamal Kundu Date: 1/27/2017 12:42:00 AM Heartbreaking and powerful; good luck in the contest, Jan. :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/27/2017 12:19:00 PM Thanks Tamal:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/26/2017 9:02:00 PM Sad one, Jan. I think this form is making poets come up with some great writes! Of course "real" is one syllable. Those syllable counters are NUTSOS Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 1/26/2017 3:15:00 PM Sadness in inked emotions drips from your pen my friend. This one was heart aching and deeply lonely feeling to me. You have used this poetic form perfectly. Much luck Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2017 6:18:00 PM Thanks Chris I think this shows I can deviate from poop a little for a more serious write:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/26/2017 12:32:00 PM - "but you live in my heart till the day I die" - Oh .... so beautifully said / written, Jan - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2017 12:41:00 PM Thanks Anne Lise:-) I think the theme will appeal to Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 1/26/2017 10:06:00 AM Hi Jan, What a sad sentimental write. I felt the loss in each word. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven- Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2017 11:39:00 AM Thanks Alexis I don't write this form often it was fun to do:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 1/26/2017 8:53:00 AM I feel the sadness and loss Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2017 11:37:00 AM Thanks Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings Date: 1/26/2017 8:38:00 AM Very emotive Jan. The Fibonacci form seems to add to the weight of expression. Good luck in the contest // Barry. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/26/2017 8:46:00 AM Thanks Barry I have written few of this form I am really pleased with the way this one turned out:-) hugs jan xx