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Alone. Your life will never improve; You can only depend on yourself Because you will find that if You have to depend on others They will so often let you down. Your independence and self-reliance Are your greatest assets. Your family and friends They only care about you Simply because You can help them in their need. If you see someone suffering Try to avoid them if you can. Your failures, Past shortcomings and problems are Because of those around you. You are most likely to succeed When you are by yourself. You are not better Together. This is a reversible poem and can (and should) also be read line by line from bottom to top. In this case, if you don't read it backwards, you won't see from a different perspective. ;) written 11.19.2015

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Date: 8/20/2018 2:14:00 PM
Jesse, a great write and a wonderful example for your contest, hope I can do as well, thanks for the inspiration ~
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/20/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you. This style has great potential and is mostly (I feel) unknown. I'm really looking forward to the entries. Good luck!
Date: 8/16/2018 8:30:00 AM
Jesse, what a powerful write! This is one of the best poems I have ever read. So clever and creative. Really makes one think. A fav! Haley
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/16/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so much. That's quite high praise.
Date: 8/6/2018 11:46:00 AM
Wow, Jesse, such an amazing reversible poem that really gives very contrasting perspectives on 'alone' and 'together'. So well-done! I hope a contest theme comes up for you where you can submit this. If not, enter it into one of Brian Strand's Premiere Contests! Your poem needs a showcase! Best wishes, and keep writing, friend! Sandra :)
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/20/2018 2:40:00 PM
Well, I made my own way. I became a PM so I could make a contest for reverse poems.

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