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Persephone's Plea

Priest of death, I humbly
Plea, we come as meager
Penitents, not seeking
Pardon, but a brief balm
Perchance, a small hope dwells
Permit a corner where
Prayers are heard in hell

3/05/22

Copyright © Michelle Faulkner | Year Posted 2022

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Ann Peck Date: 3/10/2022 4:31:00 PM A lovely poem, Michelle. What an interesting goddess. I don't know much about Greek and Roman gods and goddesses, but now I would like to read about Persephone. I love your last two lines. They're very poignant. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/10/2022 3:16:00 PM Great Pleiades and information on Persephone's Plea , Michelle, congratulations on your win. Blessings to you Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/10/2022 9:13:00 AM back with my congrats. Yours was one of my favorites. Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/10/2022 10:27:00 AM I am so flattered, thank you Andrea

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/9/2022 9:26:00 AM Michelle, this is stunning, written as a prayer from Persephone trapped in darkness six months of the year! "Permit a corner where prayers are heard in hell," "a small hope dwells." Poignant lines. This is a fav for me. Congratulations on your win! Here's to the blessings of small prayers my friend. Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/9/2022 1:28:00 PM Thank you for such an uplifting comment, Sam, yes small prayers can do much!

Bill Baker Date: 3/9/2022 7:47:00 AM A beautiful prayer of hope, Michelle. Congrats on the placement in the contest. I agree with comments below concerning the title, but rules are rules. lol Have a great day! Bill Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/9/2022 1:30:00 PM Thank you so much, Bill, I appreciate it, have a great day also!

John Watt Date: 3/8/2022 11:09:00 PM Back to offer my congratulations, though I would have voted for a higher placement. Just my bias, I suppose. Perhaps now that the contest is over you can change the title to what you originally wanted. Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/9/2022 1:31:00 PM Thank you for the vote of confidence, I am grateful for your support (and now I will change the title!) Have a wonderful Wednesday :)

Valsa George Date: 3/8/2022 9:43:00 PM Back to your poem with Congratulations on your win ! Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/9/2022 1:32:00 PM Thank you again, Valsa~

Christuraj Alex Date: 3/8/2022 6:48:00 PM Great prayer to Persephone. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/8/2022 6:49:00 PM Thank you very much, Christuraj~

Joseph May Date: 3/8/2022 3:51:00 PM Nicely penned Michelle, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/8/2022 6:49:00 PM Thank you for the placement in your contest, Joseph, I appreciate it~

John Watt Date: 3/7/2022 8:34:00 PM This is an excellent entry, Michelle - I predict a high placement in the contest. I love how you wrote it as words coming from her mouth; that really sets this apart. It reads like a line from a classic play. And you make this form seem easy.. Well done, ArtSib ~ John Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/8/2022 6:48:00 PM Thank you John, I was inspired by ESVM's poem 'Prayer to Persephone' - I am glad you understood the context, at first I was going to title it 'Persephone's Plea' but it could only have a one word title - and I did get a placement :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2022 12:19:00 PM I think you chose a unique and very nice approach to how you did this form. Very nicely done. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 3/5/2022 7:19:00 PM This is a a unique write ! The change of mode from mere description to a heartfelt prayer has given it a novelty....All the Best in the contest.... Michelle! Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/5/2022 2:14:00 PM May your prayers be heard in heaven as well dear friend, love :) Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 3/5/2022 10:18:00 AM Well done, Michelle, but I thought that was what all the weeping and wailing was about? Aloha! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/5/2022 9:56:00 AM A well written pleiades Michelle, I hadnt heard of him so I've learnt something new. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom Login to Reply

Anil Deo Date: 3/5/2022 9:01:00 AM Michelle, thanx for pithy poetry that opens my mind & many hearts to write prolificly, on various themes, per Prolific inspirations. Not to brownnose, but your poems show erudition, plus PRAYER PRESCIENT for hell in Ukraine. Paz, peace, PTL Login to Reply Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/5/2022 9:13:00 AM I too want to see peace in Ukraine, and thank you for your perceptive and poignant prose :)