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Perhaps To Dream Or Not

perhaps to dream, or not to have cradled in my palms truth from all life's lessons I've been taught to grow old since love's youth perhaps to dream again, or rot 5/13/19 contest writing challenge 2 May 2019 Lind68868 sponsor Dear Heart theme a dream

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 7:27:00 PM

oh my, this is absolutely stunning, and the music with it too. FAVE And congrats for your very well deserved win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2019 6:30:00 PM

This was destined to be a top winner. Congratulations! : )

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/24/2019 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

John Hamilton

Date: 5/23/2019 9:27:00 AM

Great write Frederic, congrats on your win, loved the music too!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2019 12:04:00 PM

- Congratulations on a great first place in this contest, a wonderful writing Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2019 9:21:00 AM

Frederic, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this amazing poem!

Frederic Parker
Date: 5/21/2019 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Dear Heart

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2019 12:51:00 AM

love the impact of the repeated thoughts at the beginning with the twist at the end, good luck in the contest I've not had chance to look at it yet:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/13/2019 7:29:00 PM

I take rot to mean crumble without a dream. A wonderful entry for the contest Frederic. The captha said Yay : ) xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2019 7:23:00 PM

Great twist at the end...a little sarcasm. Enjoyed!