Perhaps

Written: September 15, 2025, for a contest sponsored by John Lawless ********* Perhaps it was never love— just a fipple of breath in velvet dusk, a suction of names unspoken, burnished by the stygian hush between your glance and mine. Perhaps the ossuary sang first— an aria of alabaster bones, each note a necrotic lullaby. We writhed in the molten ache, palliating truth with ephemera, inveigled by the aureate hush of what we dared not name. Perhaps this is the Desideratum— a triptych of sacred forgetting, Lethe in a chalice of dedication, The hex of hope is still undulating beneath our slack-jawed silence.
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Date: 9/16/2025 5:16:00 PM
I admit to a handful of words being beyond my vocabulary, but I'm confident ignorance didn't taint my comprehension of emotions or subject, I got there just fine. It's a beautiful poem, SP. I, too, just posted a 'MIGHT NOT HAVE BEEN LOVE-ish' poem for Perhaps contest but mine is not eloquent, this is, and mine does not have a lovely ache; this does. Your poem resides in a sophisticated city high rise; mine lives in the suburbs. Being silly. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 9/15/2025 8:25:00 PM
Your use of words is outstanding, creating vibes of love, doubt, ambiguity and hope. Some usages are so unique like 'hex of hope, slack jawed silence, Lethe in a chalice.....'et al. Simply wonderful. Each line is an expression of your creative prowess. I see it as a winner. All the Best dear friend.
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Date: 9/15/2025 7:46:00 PM
This is hauntingly exquisite ,every line breathes with shadow and depth, weaving love, loss, and silence into something both fragile and eternal. The imagery is arresting, the language spellbinding. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Date: 9/15/2025 5:29:00 PM
outstanding use of vocabulary and unique images. I liked every line, but the last five were breathtaking (slack-jawed silence) Have a splendid evening, hugs from Texas, sara
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Date: 9/15/2025 10:43:00 AM
Great write. Excellent use of poetic words.
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Date: 9/15/2025 10:21:00 AM
Your "Perhaps" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading this. "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a lovely day writing away......
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Date: 9/15/2025 7:45:00 AM
Such beautiful and unique words flowing effortlessly.
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