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Pelican Versus Prey

golden-crowned pelican glides on the sea breeze suddenly a splash into the blue from above he spies the speckled trout swimming without care in water below pelican ascends again toward to sun’s warmth tasting a special treat held in its beak upon landing on the dock’s post where barnacles carry the salty scent of ocean creatures golden boy swallows the fish wriggling through an extended neck appetite satisfied for but a moment pelican takes to the sky again hunting its prey in nature’s intended way

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Date: 1/14/2012 10:36:00 AM
Them's the birds with the big, deep beaks, aint they? I can see that fish "wriggling through an extended neck." Love, daver
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:51:00 AM
soupmail in a bit....
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Date: 1/12/2012 1:00:00 PM
You sure painted this scene so well-- I really enjoyed picturing this in my mind, Carolyn! I hope all's well with you and congrats on your win! hugs
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Come to Your Senses" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2012 8:40:00 AM
I like this Carolyn. It tells a story very succinctly. Congratulations
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Date: 1/12/2012 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations. well done. x
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:04:00 PM
You write so well about the sea and the shore, Carolyn. Wonderful poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/11/2012 4:45:00 PM
Your sense of love of the ocean, and the sea, comes through so many of your poems. This is no exception! A wonderful write! (Hope all is well with you!! )
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Date: 1/9/2012 4:34:00 PM
What a fantastic write Carolyn, I enjoyed the scene a lot! You described it so accurately and perfectly! Do you live near a sea a which this occurs frequently?! If you don't, very good rendition of what happens between bird and fish! Very good poem! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/9/2012 4:24:00 PM
What a lovely scene you've painted with your words...love the action. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/9/2012 4:10:00 PM
Picture perfection in words! The image of the speckled trout being swallowed by the pelican is stuck in my mind..beautiful. Glad to see you back today, Carolyn. Love you, Annalise
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:26:00 PM
You can see plenty of pelicans along the Gulf Coast of the Southeastern United States. The brown pelican is the state bird of Louisiana. Carolyn, you have described everything here so vividly. I always see the best from you.
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:00:00 PM
Great snapshot of life in essence, and the imagery certainly plays on all the senses. Vibrant and alive, great stuff Mrs. Carolyn.
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:56:00 PM
Nice imagery, Carolyn. Interesting how, by reading your poem on senses, it was if I actually saw the scene myself by sight and not just read the words. Well done.
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