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Pegasus- Pensee

Fabled Mythical steed Spreading alabaster wings Flying at will among the stars Dreams riding on his back Pen a Pensee Barbara Gorelick 7-11-12

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/13/2012 8:46:00 AM

"Dreams riding on this back" How perfect!!!!! love, Kathy

Sidney Beck

Date: 7/13/2012 4:44:00 AM

great stuff...good luck in the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2012 10:06:00 AM

Way to go ...Winner for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2012 9:58:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Barbara and the best to you in the contest. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/11/2012 8:36:00 PM

Very nice write Barbara. The winged horse has his named spelled "Pegasus".

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2012 7:07:00 PM

Love the way you summed this up!! Nicely done, Barbara! (OH, and I hope you and Deb were able to meet and enjoy getting to know each ofter in SF !!)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/11/2012 5:34:00 PM

What a tremendously beautiful write! I love the line, "Dreams riding on his back" that's truly wonderful! Your poem here will do very well in Nettes contest! Great Work!!